When your Mafia brother punished you hard for failing in exams without knowing The Truth

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  • Опубліковано 28 лис 2024

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  • @divya50789
    @divya50789 Рік тому +2

    The last line you wrote touched my heart. ❣️

  • @a303rashidadudhwala3
    @a303rashidadudhwala3 Рік тому +2

    It was amazing can't believe Same plot but so different way u delivered it. That it was satisfying in reading and not that cruel

  • @AmandeepKaur-no3is
    @AmandeepKaur-no3is 8 місяців тому +2

    Tae didn't even listen what revenge Lee yan talking about , what if it's Jimin's mistake that he is talking reveng on him 😢😢😢

  • @jiminishiii-hs3jq
    @jiminishiii-hs3jq Рік тому +1

    Woahh...the moral at the end got me😭❤️🖇️

  • @Creative_bliss_w5m
    @Creative_bliss_w5m Рік тому +1

    Aww it’s so emotional and as like it have such a deep meaning🥰💜

  • @shajikaleeckalshajikaleeck9143

    It was amazing 🤩 ❤❤❤❤ . Stay safe and healthy dear author 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜❤️.

  • @chanchalsen9478
    @chanchalsen9478 Рік тому +1

    Wow you are too amazing. Alag style mein reader ki request bhi puri kar di aur logo ko acchi si advise bhi de dey. I hope jiski request ho ye one shot woh jarur padhkar dekhkar khush ho jaye. Love you sweetheart ❤❤❤

    • @daydreamers1319
      @daydreamers1319  Рік тому +1

      Thank you so much. That was her b'day request and can't deny her so tired to make something different. ♥️

  • @Baby_mochi-t2k
    @Baby_mochi-t2k Місяць тому +1

    Our poor Jiminaaaaaa😭😭😭😩😭😩😭

  • @samiastar1227
    @samiastar1227 Рік тому +3

    it was so....so ....so beautiful unnie i ..i loved it very much 🤧
    I literally cried my eyes out 😭😭
    But it was beyond the amazing ♥♥

  • @christine1965
    @christine1965 7 місяців тому +1

    It had such a strong storyline sad🥺😢😭but the writing was good.❤️💛💖

  • @Withyou_RJ
    @Withyou_RJ 10 місяців тому

    The moral at the end...wish my parents and teachers would listen

  • @gamerxyt78
    @gamerxyt78 8 місяців тому +1

    your last line wins my heart ❤😊

  • @sumitashrestha6066
    @sumitashrestha6066 Рік тому +3

    The ff isss soo soo soo gud i mean " you nice , keep going" 😭💜 i really love itt
    And a REQUEST its a vminkook 🤧🤭 plwsw *puppy eyes*

  • @DeepakRout-lo3hc
    @DeepakRout-lo3hc Рік тому +1

    Firstly I wanna say thnku and u r sooo brave unnie to add this much cruel things in u r vdo and that 5 months reminds of 5 years of smthng unnie i literally have tears and my heart aches but but u r amazing unnie if u will do this type of vdo I will always support you no matter what u make i will support u but u do this much and that too which is totally different from other vdo of u rs it soooo bravery of u unnie I think u also cried while making this vdo soooooooooo good unnie 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜 and I will just suggest u that if this vdo of urs some may will not like and some may can comment harshly just don't take their words seriously unnie u r amazing remember that happy navratri unnie lots of love from u r sona u r sona loves u alot don't over work and take care of u r self properly be healthy unnie I don't have any elder sister except u so take care of u r self so preciously bcz u r so precious to me 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

    • @daydreamers1319
      @daydreamers1319  Рік тому +1

      Awwww Sona 😘 you are go good. Thank you so much for your warm comments. ♥️

  • @Linda-g7f
    @Linda-g7f 7 місяців тому +1

    "Hugging without me. Isn't it to much cruelty with me "
    -Jk

  • @kookiekookie-bn1mm
    @kookiekookie-bn1mm Рік тому +1

    It's so amazing Unnie 💜 I just love it. 💜

  • @divya50789
    @divya50789 Рік тому +1

    Di it's so good but you made me cry.

  • @nikita_421
    @nikita_421 Рік тому +1

    It's amazing dii 💜
    The storyline was so perfect🤌💜 You wrote it so well dii. You r really amazing. Yes tae beated jimin but he got proper punishment for it. Jk's role was so perfect for this story Awesome di. You always write each and every story perfectly. Don't worry dii. Love u a lot💜💜😘😘😘

  • @prithvismom-yd3xr
    @prithvismom-yd3xr Рік тому +1

    WOW 😳😳 amajinnnnn dear 🥳💜🔮

  • @PrincessMoiraMarie
    @PrincessMoiraMarie Рік тому +1

    I can’t wait for the one shot💜

  • @beccaBuyan-od4ob
    @beccaBuyan-od4ob 2 місяці тому

    Hurt so much😢😢😢

  • @ChimmyChimmy-m3b
    @ChimmyChimmy-m3b Рік тому +1

    It's so good Unnie 💜

  • @ShreyaGagneja-iv6dn
    @ShreyaGagneja-iv6dn Рік тому +1

    Ohhhhh

  • @darlenedunn2938
    @darlenedunn2938 Рік тому +1

    Love the story

  • @nikita_421
    @nikita_421 Рік тому +3

    Di i have a request...umm...whenever u will post next one shot can u plz upload my request (pout)💜

    • @daydreamers1319
      @daydreamers1319  Рік тому +1

      Series is already going on your request. So, I can't One Shot on same idea. Give me another idea. I made a post where I asked everyone's idea for One Shot.

    • @nikita_421
      @nikita_421 Рік тому

      @@daydreamers1319 di i gave u my idea there 💜🤗
      But i had already given you that idea before too 💜

  • @ifraaltaf8093
    @ifraaltaf8093 Рік тому +1

    Amazing ❤❤❤❤❤

  • @mahalakshmijayachandran2903
    @mahalakshmijayachandran2903 Рік тому +1

    Awesome akka 💜💜🫂❤️

  • @Creamymoon737
    @Creamymoon737 Рік тому +1

    Excuse me author nim😂😂
    Hello ,my name is v I am good boy❤

    • @daydreamers1319
      @daydreamers1319  Рік тому +1

      But V turned into beast and beat our poor Mochi alot 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

  • @Love_equals_ami
    @Love_equals_ami Рік тому +1

    Just can't wait for the oneshot but unnie I have a question is there y/n in this fanfiction?btw I'm so so soooo excited for this oneshot😊❤️❤️💕

    • @elanurdenniz
      @elanurdenniz Рік тому +1

      There is no y/n author told us before asking about this actually it was a request so Jimin will be tae's younger brother

  • @ShivangeeShandiliya-uw7rx
    @ShivangeeShandiliya-uw7rx 6 місяців тому

    Beautiful 💜💜💜💜💜💜

  • @ananddeshpande7639
    @ananddeshpande7639 25 днів тому

    Please could you make a fanfic with same story like this for txt yeonjun and beomgyu.

  • @kewalsingh939
    @kewalsingh939 Рік тому +1

    💜💜💜💜💜

  • @divya50789
    @divya50789 Рік тому +1

    Di you know my bickering partner found new partner 9848 for herself and forgot me when I wasn't here and here I'm missing her like a big fool. 💔💔💔💔💔

    • @daydreamers1319
      @daydreamers1319  Рік тому

      Asa nhi hai Avyu. She must be busy in something. Don't be sad. ♥️

  • @Muskan-hz8gs
    @Muskan-hz8gs Рік тому +1

    divya didi sach sahc btana yeh kisi reader ki demand thi na ??? btao btao kyonki meri divya didi itni cfruel nhi ho sakti ki ek bichare jmasoon bachhe ko aise maare or mujh bichare masoon bachhe ko itta rulaye ??

    • @daydreamers1319
      @daydreamers1319  Рік тому +1

      Request thi warna Mai kabhi itna cruel ffs nhi likhti. ♥️

    • @Muskan-hz8gs
      @Muskan-hz8gs Рік тому

      @@daydreamers1319 see i knew it meri divya didi kitni cute aur sweet hain woh itni cruelty never

  • @ShreyaGagneja-iv6dn
    @ShreyaGagneja-iv6dn Рік тому +2

    Itna marna accha nhi hn