@@fanfictionworld001author❤ when u wrote yn's some of the sentence in *hmm * only one meme was coming in my mind that time *hmm * means _hey marry me_ 😂😂..BTW it was so good 😊
I'm honestly obsessed with Junwoos' entry and when Yoongi and Yn said 'you didn't see anything' to Jungkook. You really did an amazing work author, it was very nice. I'm definitely gonna watch this again.
"Love is a spark, and obsession is flame, Love is beautiful and obsession is insane, but when you are obsessed in love it's inhumane, ethreally inhumane" ~Zak ....
No you are the best I wish your stories just not an imagination write you makes k dramas world Best dramas make another story like mafias of character suga yoongi❤
OH My God!! finally another upload .... you know!? I check your channel on daily basis even tho I left the notifications on and I know I'll get notified but I just miss your vids :') .... Your stories gives me comfort ..... please keep writing .. and take care of yourself
The ff was soo sooo goood i can't even express it in words .what a combination of love ,suspect and mystery. This has the bestest plot scene ever. I laughed and i cried. You don't need Oscar, Oscar needs you.... 💜💜💜💜💜
What an author you are!! How you manage to bring all the emotions in a 40 min ff. It's unbelievable. I somehow knew maybe yn is the one who is betraying Yoongi. But u handled the situation well. The way you describe each and every emotions is praisable + the heartbeat sound was cherry on the cake. Loved your work.💜💜
im also an author in wattpad platform and i do the BTS FF too, i can say i give you my respect! because your story its just perfect! its beyond the world. seeing how the way you make the line of the story and how you describe it. its totally amazing. because i know how hard to fill the emotion and feels in every those words of your story! and its takes long time. thankyou for ur hard work! keep making these masterpiece! love you!💜💜💜💜
11:52 the way Dusk till dawn started when Yoongi saw Yn after A week... god you took my heart again. It'll be good if you keep it to yourself. My heart will be safe with you😭😭 I can feel yoongi is in love, it's just he never realised at first.
i dont know if anyone told u this but ur a really good and talented writer i am so impressed with this keep on going my fav and the best fan fict i ever read keep going unnie!!!! :)
Dudeee I loved it, the way you used the sound effects i don't remember when i just got lost in the story, your writing is absolutely gorgeous🤌 seriously amazing, keep it up,you nice keep going
Unnie i don't have words to praise this masterpiece i was feeling like i was watching a movie it's just beyond words i just can't explain what you just have made , i just can't
Not many authors can post these beautiful one or two shots. It's undoubtedly beautiful. Glad that u and your channel exists. And off course your series are also really good.Keep going 💜
woow Literally the best ff i have ever read fr. So lovely 💓💓💓It won't be enoughno matter how u are appreciated for this masterpiece. A huge round of applause to you for this heart warming creation of yours. I am gonna read it again and again.
This was a very excellent story the way you manipulated the story was brilliant, and the making love part was great the way you described it not putting too much out there, being able to imagination what was going on in that room and still letting them know what they could imagine. The surprise at the end did not see that one coming I was for sure that Suzy was the one that was going to betray him what store in ended beautifully then again only thing that's having your love is beautiful. Thank you for such a great story keep up the good work I truly appreciate it I appreciate your time.
OMGoodness, that was totally amazing, I felt I was there, I was Y/N, only because I love YoonGi hehe, he really would make a brilliant Mafia King, he is the King, he's the Boss, thank you so much, made my day reading that, Xxxx
I was thinking about to ask you for a Yoongi series of ff and here you are like always with a masterpiece .... It feels like you've got some power of reading your subscribers mind 😅(just kidding!) Lol! It's not a series but it has the power to decrease my hunger.... You are the best author.
Ok but as someone who watched 114 ff, I can tell that was the best ff I ever watched in my entire life Idk why but yoongi ff are so good, the story is good the personages are good, the sounds, da moment when they do unholy things is good Like that a clear 101% 👌 Edit: lmao I checked my ff playlist and finally I watched 309 ff lol but well it was da best
I'm shy🤩but the girl the way you reach at the climax of every emotion,like you have felt yourself those things,am in love with your writing,c'mon keep it up
Damn you right so good. Even if its long its worth it. I really liked your sense of writing. Your an amazing writer. Keep it up. Love you. By the way first time on your channel 😅
I'm literally out of words to describe this masterpiece...this was more than amazing, the words selection, background music....all were damn perfect and amazing...❤❤❤❤❤you describe the feelings of them by words,, the last dialogues were on another level, I read them again and again and i was smiling throughout Thanks for bringing smile on our faces....💜💜💜💜💜
Wow really a big round of applause 💜💜💜💜 your really good with writing 💜 each plot is amazing beyond my expectations and the love sence... If I being honest I can feel it my heart was pounding 💗💗💗 thank you so much for this masterpiece 👏👏 I don't think there can be a bonus part because it's perfect.......
I can imagine everything in this ff it's my one of the best ff i ever see it's make me feel happiness, scar, loneliness, anger, guilt, sadness and a true love it's just a great hands of to you I just wish that every true army deserve thire idol Korean oppa in thire life and for that we have to work hard
Wow! I'm speechless! You are really a good story writer and the plot twists are amazing! Btw, I'm your new subscriber! Please keep making more mafia ff s where yn is strong!!! Lot's of love from India💜
O My God! c'mon bruh another masterpiece. you can't do this to us bro like seriously its perfect.........in fact I have no words to describe the beauty of this ff. Real example of perfection ❤❤ ..... Keep up your work 💯❤
@@fanfictionworld001 Yep, I wanted to cry, laugh, slap myself and what not plus the 18+ part... I wanted to laugh so hard but I couldn't cuz everyone around me were sleeping. Overall it was a master piece
No word's are coming out from my mouth you did a spectacular job butterfly 🦋 🫂 I'm really proud of you baby 😊😊❤️❤️.... The way you showed the misunderstanding created a whole mess and ruined their beautiful life with revenge , and how she didn't betrayed him , the way they both hold the trust in eachother it's just hit the spot ❤️❤️ i loved it You nice keep going like this Saranghae bun ❤️🫂🦋 ...
No matter whatever i do, whatever i write, I know you'll gonna love it. I'll not gonna thank you for this but I'm really really glad that you love it genuinely. Thank you so much for being with me 🥰
I really appreciate your skills. I am a romance reader and i have read so many ffs. But this one was totally my type. Everything was just amazing and it was giving dark romance vibes which i liked most as a dark romance ( mafia romance) lover. BTW yoongi is my bias in Bts. So tnx for his version. This personality suit him totally in frictional world. This is the best ff i have ever seen with a good storyline and less drama. Totally loved it. U r very creative. I am writing this comment to encourage u for more this type of ffs. Take ur tym nd create more. Lots of love nd support...💞🤞
You are the most beautiful author. Because you don't make the characters bad infact you portray them very perfectly according to their real self. I love your ffs so much. Keep on I'll support you ❤❤
It was a masterpiece uniee There is no regret for waiting a little long for ur videos 😭 If her father didn't surrender himself then it could be more good like I'm feeling bad for him
@@fanfictionworld001actually that's very true! Being a writer myself I can guarantee that 10000000%. It feels different when you write Hyung line FF. You can't get the same feeling while writing maknae line FF's. It's more like.. you are doing what you love when you write Hyung line FF's. But it doesn't mean that we write maknae line fics due to pressure or something... It's just we wanna be different. That's it. I'm not offending anyone or anything. This is just something I felt and I wanted to share. There are many writers who portray maknae line fics very beautifully.
Ur the best ff writer ...u know I always think u in a very high place in my mind Ur ffs just fix ur worth and I can say ur writting it like an expert ........
Wooow even the ff is long i did'nt get bored you know author i was watching this when suddenly my laptop shut down it means it has no battery i was so mad cuz i was watching a good ff then my laptop suddenly shut down ughh but i really really like this story so much i love the story happy ending and plss author can you do my request it's,When the idol fell in love with an cute girl it's yoongi ff to plsss author!..
I really loved it the way you described almost every feeling and the voice over background was just perfect.🤌🏼 And THE MOST IMP DAMN HE GIVE THAT COLDY HOT MAFIA VIBES🖤 Loved this one too, Di you nice keep going.👍🏻💜
gurl u did an amzing job writing this ff i can't even believe what i just read😳 like its awesome its like a work of an author!!!! u can be a great author for sure..!!! the story line the music the dialogues the curiosity and every fukin god damn was soo gorgeous if i knew u in person i would be litterly begging to u to give me lesson on writing ffs u explained the spicy scene(s*x scene) wayy too good like it's not easy to go with this much details cause i know because i am an author too u did a great fuking gorgeous job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!💖
tbh, i was gonna cry at some point . im really amazed by the fact that how you came up with this idea.... you are really awsome and a its a masterpies , please keep going . borahe
Tbh, the story become complicated a bit at the end. Like, a lot happened. But he was also not at fault to trust her again, after all he lose his heart to her. . The dominancy they had during that whole scene(smut part) was quite thrilling.
Yeah there was many things to focus. Everyone is right by their pov. It was actually a mess at the end, I could do better but the thing happened is happened. The sm't ... hmmm i also enjoyed writing that part🤏🏻
@@fanfictionworld001 Yeah, you could do better and I want you to do better. It's just, it could've been more befitting. It's just my honest review, I hope you take it in a positive way.
Yaaa !! Min Yoongi 😩😩 such a interesting ff For a minute i thought that assistant is gonna be the enemy's daughter but it was YN ! 😮 I know everyone loves min yoongi's savage vibes ! ❤️🤝Keep going 🤗
Btw,.... I could actually imagine yoongi's concept photos being used in mafia ffs .. it gives such vibes ToT
He gave the real life mafia vibe😩
@@fanfictionworld001 mybe our joonie's enlisted final he will also leaves us soon😢😢😢
@@fanfictionworld001 is mrs. mochi9503 channel is your??
@@bts_ff415 no, I don't have any other account. Mrs. Mochi channel is not mine.
@@fanfictionworld001author❤ when u wrote yn's some of the sentence in *hmm * only one meme was coming in my mind that time *hmm * means _hey marry me_
😂😂..BTW it was so good 😊
I'm honestly obsessed with Junwoos' entry and when Yoongi and Yn said 'you didn't see anything' to Jungkook. You really did an amazing work author, it was very nice. I'm definitely gonna watch this again.
"StOp this LoVe LiKe tHinG" this part got me cracking up ong
"Love is a spark, and obsession is flame,
Love is beautiful and obsession is insane, but when you are obsessed in love it's inhumane, ethreally inhumane"
~Zak ....
again amazing story i like y/n's character and yoong's character Even though it was cold, it was also sweet and cute. but what happened to that cat 😂😂
The cat is living his best life. Don't worry
Just imagine that he's with Yoongi and safe😂
Yoongi and safe don't match suga is a professional mafia not he has the vibes of mafia
If thire is an award for making fan fictions so you'll be the legend and also deserve Oscar award
@@NP-ex4en yesh
I'm not that much good to win an Oscar tho😩
No you are the best I wish your stories just not an imagination write you makes k dramas world Best dramas make another story like mafias of character suga yoongi❤
Ugghhhh.... please someone give this story to director and make it as a movie 😭😭 it's so booms
OH My God!! finally another upload .... you know!? I check your channel on daily basis even tho I left the notifications on and I know I'll get notified but I just miss your vids :') .... Your stories gives me comfort ..... please keep writing .. and take care of yourself
You also take care of yourself 💜
At 12:7 the scene where he hugged her and that background music is just amazing ❤👏 Seriously I felt goosebumps all of sudden at that movement......
Anyone who noticed the fact that she could walk😂❤
The ff was soo sooo goood i can't even express it in words .what a combination of love ,suspect and mystery. This has the bestest plot scene ever. I laughed and i cried. You don't need Oscar, Oscar needs you.... 💜💜💜💜💜
It's my first time watching yoongi ff. It was really masterpiece!!!
Welp! I gotta go buy more Hobi water at the store!
I have no words... The ff was soo good like the twist or y/n's bossy nature.. sooo good ... I love the ff ❤🫰🔥🔥
What an author you are!! How you manage to bring all the emotions in a 40 min ff. It's unbelievable. I somehow knew maybe yn is the one who is betraying Yoongi. But u handled the situation well. The way you describe each and every emotions is praisable + the heartbeat sound was cherry on the cake. Loved your work.💜💜
Thank you so much 🥰
im also an author in wattpad platform and i do the BTS FF too, i can say i give you my respect! because your story its just perfect! its beyond the world. seeing how the way you make the line of the story and how you describe it. its totally amazing.
because i know how hard to fill the emotion and feels in every those words of your story! and its takes long time. thankyou for ur hard work! keep making these masterpiece! love you!💜💜💜💜
Thank you so much dear💜
Take my love 🫂
Thus should be casted in a k-drama.. It's a
*M A S T E R P I E C E* 💜✨ I loved it so much!!💜
11:52 the way Dusk till dawn started when Yoongi saw Yn after A week... god you took my heart again. It'll be good if you keep it to yourself. My heart will be safe with you😭😭
I can feel yoongi is in love, it's just he never realised at first.
That was the time, we all realised he already fall for her 😩
A REAL MASTERPIECE. I CANT NAME THIS MASTERPIECE
i dont know if anyone told u this but ur a really good and talented writer i am so impressed with this keep on going my fav and the best fan fict i ever read keep going unnie!!!! :)
If FFs like these became into movies, Army's innocence will be the greatest 😂
Btw amazing story ❤
Dudeee I loved it, the way you used the sound effects i don't remember when i just got lost in the story, your writing is absolutely gorgeous🤌 seriously amazing, keep it up,you nice keep going
Thank you 💜
Hands down the best ff I've ever read. I don't comment much but your writing skills are top tier. Love it
0:45
Its too beautiful to say anything. Very strong very powerful. Damn this is sooo good
Thank you 💜
this was so good. i really loved the storyline and the way you describe the characters. of course this is a masterpiece
Thank you 💜
Unnie i don't have words to praise this masterpiece i was feeling like i was watching a movie it's just beyond words i just can't explain what you just have made , i just can't
BRILLIANT!!!!! PLSSS PART 2 LONG VERSION UNIEEE WE NEED IT 🎉💜😘
Not many authors can post these beautiful one or two shots. It's undoubtedly beautiful. Glad that u and your channel exists. And off course your series are also really good.Keep going 💜
Thank you 💜
woow Literally the best ff i have ever read fr. So lovely 💓💓💓It won't be enoughno matter how u are appreciated for this masterpiece. A huge round of applause to you for this heart warming creation of yours. I am gonna read it again and again.
This was a very excellent story the way you manipulated the story was brilliant, and the making love part was great the way you described it not putting too much out there, being able to imagination what was going on in that room and still letting them know what they could imagine. The surprise at the end did not see that one coming I was for sure that Suzy was the one that was going to betray him what store in ended beautifully then again only thing that's having your love is beautiful. Thank you for such a great story keep up the good work I truly appreciate it I appreciate your time.
You know why I love your channel because you write ffs of HYUNG line too not only the maknaes, 💜
😌💜
Bombastic side eye 👀
another masterpiece I see
🌝🌝
I wish I could forget this ff again and again so I could read it as many times as I want
true
OMGoodness, that was totally amazing, I felt I was there, I was Y/N, only because I love YoonGi hehe, he really would make a brilliant Mafia King, he is the King, he's the Boss, thank you so much, made my day reading that, Xxxx
🌚❤️🔥
MAN WHAT WAS THIS!? PERFECT. SOMETHING WE ALL WANTED TO WATCH.
Blasting....... Mind blowing....... Amazing......💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
🌚♥️
@@fanfictionworld001 can you add download option please💜💜🤗
I was thinking about to ask you for a Yoongi series of ff and here you are like always with a masterpiece .... It feels like you've got some power of reading your subscribers mind 😅(just kidding!) Lol! It's not a series but it has the power to decrease my hunger.... You are the best author.
Ok but as someone who watched 114 ff, I can tell that was the best ff I ever watched in my entire life
Idk why but yoongi ff are so good, the story is good the personages are good, the sounds, da moment when they do unholy things is good
Like that a clear 101% 👌
Edit: lmao I checked my ff playlist and finally I watched 309 ff lol
but well it was da best
Thank you so much💜 it means a lot to me. I'm glad that you love it🫂
OMG I'VE BEEN FINDING THIS FOR AGES! I FINALLY FOUND IT AGAIN 😭😭😭
Ikr! Literally the same happened with me 😭😭
I'm shy🤩but the girl the way you reach at the climax of every emotion,like you have felt yourself those things,am in love with your writing,c'mon keep it up
REWATCHING THIS FF.. LOVE IT TOO MUCH UNNIE.
40:03 unnie you've outdone yourself and I am so proud of you
Damn you right so good. Even if its long its worth it. I really liked your sense of writing. Your an amazing writer. Keep it up. Love you.
By the way first time on your channel 😅
THAT WAS AMAZING,but I also started crying at the end because I thought yn died 😭
Thank you so much sissy. For this best best yoongi ff .
Thanks a lot 💜💜🥰
I'm literally out of words to describe this masterpiece...this was more than amazing, the words selection, background music....all were damn perfect and amazing...❤❤❤❤❤you describe the feelings of them by words,, the last dialogues were on another level, I read them again and again and i was smiling throughout
Thanks for bringing smile on our faces....💜💜💜💜💜
Wow really a big round of applause 💜💜💜💜 your really good with writing 💜 each plot is amazing beyond my expectations and the love sence... If I being honest I can feel it my heart was pounding 💗💗💗 thank you so much for this masterpiece 👏👏 I don't think there can be a bonus part because it's perfect.......
Thank you so much 💜
I can imagine everything in this ff it's my one of the best ff i ever see it's make me feel happiness, scar, loneliness, anger, guilt, sadness and a true love it's just a great hands of to you I just wish that every true army deserve thire idol Korean oppa in thire life and for that we have to work hard
Wow! I'm speechless! You are really a good story writer and the plot twists are amazing! Btw, I'm your new subscriber! Please keep making more mafia ff s where yn is strong!!! Lot's of love from India💜
Welcome to our beautiful Family 💜
O My God! c'mon bruh another masterpiece. you can't do this to us bro like seriously its perfect.........in fact I have no words to describe the beauty of this ff. Real example of perfection ❤❤ ..... Keep up your work 💯❤
Thank you 💜
I was like WHAT THE FCK 👁️👄👁️ when I got to know that Y/n is Kim Junwoo's daughter
That twist was good right? 🌚
@@fanfictionworld001 Yep, I wanted to cry, laugh, slap myself and what not plus the 18+ part... I wanted to laugh so hard but I couldn't cuz everyone around me were sleeping. Overall it was a master piece
This FF is so fucking good ..u can literally feel that badass vibes ..both the characters are showed perfectly ..keep up the work 💜💜
No word's are coming out from my mouth you did a spectacular job butterfly 🦋 🫂 I'm really proud of you baby 😊😊❤️❤️.... The way you showed the misunderstanding created a whole mess and ruined their beautiful life with revenge , and how she didn't betrayed him , the way they both hold the trust in eachother it's just hit the spot ❤️❤️ i loved it
You nice keep going like this Saranghae bun ❤️🫂🦋 ...
No matter whatever i do, whatever i write, I know you'll gonna love it. I'll not gonna thank you for this but I'm really really glad that you love it genuinely. Thank you so much for being with me 🥰
id love to see a fanfiction or like a twoshot in which jin is like the cold principle while y/n is the sweet rebelious girl
Good idea 👍🏻
Thanks for making me cry at 4am😭
BRO I CRIED TOO😭😭😭
I don't cried becze I am cold hearted girl every one says
But I love your every story every moment of story is like a professional life ❤❤
I really appreciate your skills. I am a romance reader and i have read so many ffs. But this one was totally my type. Everything was just amazing and it was giving dark romance vibes which i liked most as a dark romance ( mafia romance) lover. BTW yoongi is my bias in Bts. So tnx for his version. This personality suit him totally in frictional world. This is the best ff i have ever seen with a good storyline and less drama. Totally loved it. U r very creative. I am writing this comment to encourage u for more this type of ffs. Take ur tym nd create more. Lots of love nd support...💞🤞
Author- nim thus was really amazing !!!the best yoongi fanfic ever!! great job💜💜💜
*YASSS WE NEED PART 2 INDEED, GOOD JOB*
I I I I ummm mm u I can’t utter a single fucking word the intro gave me fucking shivers bro
And the whole fanfiction was also a masterpiece loved it 🥰
You are the most beautiful author. Because you don't make the characters bad infact you portray them very perfectly according to their real self. I love your ffs so much. Keep on I'll support you ❤❤
Thank you so much. Take my love 💖
Damn I am in love with.....
You &Me
Isha I might become crazy cuz of ur ffs
Hey... STOB it
gawshhh... author its just a mater piece.. i mean how boldly u show every characters.. hats off to u.. me gonaa subscribe nowww😘
OMFG THE STORY LINE IS AMAZING
Thank you 💜
@@fanfictionworld001 Ur most welcom keep it up 💜
Actually, I've been waiting for you to upload....finally it's here...I know it'll be a masterpieces too...❤
❤yes
It was a masterpiece uniee
There is no regret for waiting a little long for ur videos 😭
If her father didn't surrender himself then it could be more good like I'm feeling bad for him
Me too😭🥺
I really like the y/n's character she is fearless, bold, strong, powerful.....
Yes she is indeed.. I actually love to write this kind of characters. 😩❤️
Then I'm looking forward to reading this type of characters.... I really appreciate your hard work author❤❤🩹💜
After that taehyung met Jungkook and fell in love 😂😂😂
😂😂😂😂😂😂
We need a bonus part plz
Your ffs are just like k-dramas it's all so addictive.......... you nice keep going 💜👍
U topped my charts of expectations 💜💜
I always want hyung line ffs but there are just little of them but here I get all of my wishes fulfilled
Tbh Hyung line ffs really hits different and Writing hyung line ff is actually the best feeling in this whole world 😩
@@fanfictionworld001 well if u say so
Bcoz I'm not an author 😅 so I can't experience it
@@fanfictionworld001 Tbh YOUR hyung line ff's really hit different and it's best hyung line fiction so on.💜
@@fanfictionworld001actually that's very true! Being a writer myself I can guarantee that 10000000%. It feels different when you write Hyung line FF. You can't get the same feeling while writing maknae line FF's. It's more like.. you are doing what you love when you write Hyung line FF's. But it doesn't mean that we write maknae line fics due to pressure or something... It's just we wanna be different. That's it. I'm not offending anyone or anything. This is just something I felt and I wanted to share. There are many writers who portray maknae line fics very beautifully.
Everytime when I see your ff then I think nothing can be more better than this but then I remember your all ff are just masterpiece.
Thank you 💜
WT- I never expected YN to be kim it was_______ yeah um speechless......ahhh , it was so gud that I wanna marry this ff😭😭😭💜💜💜✨️✨️✨️
🤭🤭
The FF was so beautifully written 😍.Each and every emotions and I like this type of yn . JUST LOVE IT 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
Thank you 💜
Let me cry
This is so good😭😭😭
This is the best one i have ever read i had read more than 100 ff but only this captured my jeart so much ❤
your ff are always my comfort zone
Please I beg you do more Yoongi Mafia one shots or series IDC JUST DO IT THEY ARE SO FREAKING GOOD
We are begging, begging please 😂
Sure I'll make.. but,... As i just finished this one, I'm gonna try this mafia type again later..
@@fanfictionworld001 okay.. but please don’t make me wait forever because I can never find good ffs on Yoongi…
It's a complete masterpiece 🎉💜💜💜💜💜
Ur the best ff writer ...u know I always think u in a very high place in my mind Ur ffs just fix ur worth and I can say ur writting it like an expert ........
Thank you so much 💗
@@fanfictionworld001 🥰
Nobody just me being jealous of an ff
what to expect? It's a masterpiece like almost all your stories are🤧💜 , I'm kinda obsessed 😭😭😭
Take my love🫂💜
You are a really good writer..
Wooow even the ff is long i did'nt get bored you know author i was watching this when suddenly my laptop shut down it means it has no battery i was so mad cuz i was watching a good ff then my laptop suddenly shut down ughh but i really really like this story so much i love the story happy ending and plss author can you do my request it's,When the idol fell in love with an cute girl it's yoongi ff to plsss author!..
Ngl author, its one of the best I've read. Thank you so much!¡
the ff was amazing i love it! tbh the best ff i ever read i love ur work keep going
oh btw u got a new subscriber :)
Welcome to our family 💖
I really loved it the way you described almost every feeling and the voice over background was just perfect.🤌🏼
And THE MOST IMP DAMN HE GIVE THAT COLDY HOT MAFIA VIBES🖤
Loved this one too,
Di you nice keep going.👍🏻💜
Thank you 💜
This was honestly the best ff i have ever seen
Btw new subscriber❤🎉
Welcome to our beautiful Family 💜
Nooooooooooooooooo
Words left author..😢❤❤❤❤❤
You ate it all and didn't even leave a
Choora😂
gurl u did an amzing job writing this ff i can't even believe what i just read😳 like its awesome its like a work of an author!!!! u can be a great author for sure..!!! the story line the music the dialogues the curiosity and every fukin god damn was soo gorgeous if i knew u in person i would be litterly begging to u to give me lesson on writing ffs u explained the spicy scene(s*x scene) wayy too good like it's not easy to go with this much details cause i know because i am an author too u did a great fuking gorgeous job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!💖
I don't usually comment but this ff literally touch my heart
Thank u so much for making such ff l really appreciate it and it was the best❤
min yoongi oneshot is awesome
Ohh my god finally...💜💜💜
I was waiting for your new ff...😍😍😍
tbh, i was gonna cry at some point . im really amazed by the fact that how you came up with this idea.... you are really awsome and a its a masterpies , please keep going . borahe
Thank you 💜
What a masterpiece
I love it very very very much
Such a great story! Loved it soooo mucheuuu 😭😭
Me reading the ONESHOT scene be like :..... WHAT..... DID..... I..... JUST..... READ.. 😳😶💀💀💀
Tbh, the story become complicated a bit at the end. Like, a lot happened. But he was also not at fault to trust her again, after all he lose his heart to her.
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The dominancy they had during that whole scene(smut part) was quite thrilling.
Yeah there was many things to focus. Everyone is right by their pov. It was actually a mess at the end, I could do better but the thing happened is happened.
The sm't ... hmmm i also enjoyed writing that part🤏🏻
@@fanfictionworld001 Yeah, you could do better and I want you to do better. It's just, it could've been more befitting. It's just my honest review, I hope you take it in a positive way.
Sure, i took it in a positive way as i know you want me to do my best. I also want so.. Thank you ❤️
author nim tbh i really liked the way you making your ffs
i loved this ff
you earned yourself a subscriber 😊😊
Yaaa !! Min Yoongi 😩😩 such a interesting ff
For a minute i thought that assistant is gonna be the enemy's daughter but it was YN ! 😮 I know everyone loves min yoongi's savage vibes ! ❤️🤝Keep going 🤗
Just like what I wanted .....
Great, Awesome, Beautiful pics and love you author... .. the ff is just great🔮🔮💜💜