Junkyard in space where starships and forgotten technology are left HFY Sci-Fi
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- Опубліковано 25 вер 2024
- A vast junkyard in space, where derelict starships and forgotten technology are left to decay, hides ancient secrets and powerful artifacts. The protagonist, a scavenger with a knack for finding valuable relics, stumbles upon an alien device that can control time. As she navigates rival scavengers and galactic factions, she must decide whether to use the device for personal gain or protect it from falling into the wrong hands.
Good story but metal in space doesn't rust.
Space rust?
Hmmm. You know things can't rust in space right?
and also: you haven't told anyone about the device yet, how can your opponents get wind of it?
Uh, hold on a minute. If she is alone, how did all these opponents know what she had? Did you skip a chapter?
It was a plot ton, from an ancient ship.
It's a temporal device, who knows where and when it has made an appearance?
So, how did the universe hear of the artifact?
Been thinking the same thing for awhile now
Concept is ok. Story is bad