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"Can't miss your new videos! The scene at 2:30 was so moving! 💔"

Boring

Where's her pointed ears? These beautiful alien women always meet up with noble and kind men. What if she met up with an abusive, controlling man who would take advantage of her condition?

I think that Claira's name was maybe said the same way twice for the entire story. Who ever is narating tends to stumble/hesitate with some words causing sentence discontinuity or rythm (distracting from story line).

It's funny how so many lines are broken.

And they all speak English.

DAMN first 6 mins are the end of another story about clara etc then goes straight into the middle the the title story. NOT GOOD BRUCE!!!!

“You have failed me for the last time captain Keena!”

you might want to think about things like how they managed to be speaking in person , from one line to the next when there were seperated by distance and non contact in the line before

Fitst off. How many Off worlds, are dying? Peehaps Earth could create a federation of possable mates ? Note Using dreams could be invade rhe private persoal areas we hold sacret

A pointless exercise in vapid suspense for no reason

I thought he was supposed to do Lorena’s daughter, not Lorena herself

It’ll take more than one pairing to save her species, it’ll take a few thousand pairings for that

"Can't miss your new videos! The scene at 2:30 was so moving! 💔"

Every time you release a new video, I can't wait! The story at 4:00 was really impressive! 😲"

Alright, you had a Jumpstart beginning, but that's okay. How about giving him some ball's and keeping the f'ed up government from taking her without him. Better yet he needed to kick some ass and go find a planet that would leave them the hell alone. Still studying her, isn't a good ending. We all know how that crap ends.

What do you want ? I want you and and a family with at least 4 children. A life long love a mate.

She made his brein hurt, ok call the teen titans, have Larry come by with a brain bandaid lol.

First

What a sick story...

The pauses, rhythm, emphasis and intonation in the narration are off and make this a hard story to listen to.

Be my husband or my prisoner. What's the difference?

The description of her leg and breading parts sure don't sound sexy.😅

Did you pick the picture with the beard stubble on her face, or was there some tangent where she was one of Tolkien's dwarves?

Who knew a human medic could bring such a wild twist to her story? The struggle, the mystery, and the connection-this is next-level sci-fi drama

Very nice👍 🌹

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I would love to hear the rest of the story !❤

I approve of this story he was drinking tea not coffee for once.

Life is getting HARDER & HARDER. We need fantasy fairytale love story endings to lift our spirits & give us hope.

Title is WRONG,and MISLEADING,AS USUAL!

This didn't really make a lot of sense. It just left things hanging. He had no reason to be there at all. Strange.

Not a very interesting story!

I just "MIGHT" be interested in watching but until you tell me "what she was" as in the introduction then there is NO WAY I'm going to even turn it on psst 15 seconds.......... Your turn..

nice little story !

wtf lol

It is a bit annoying when he retreads questions she answered more than 4 times. Also: there was no passage of days, yet it jumps to all of a sudden it's been days even though they were still in the same spot, sane conversation, just an anomalous "after all we've been through" is narratively jarring.

HOW DID SHE SURVIVE WITH NO FOOD OR FLUIDS, AND THAT WOULD HAVE BEEN THE FIRST THING A HOST WOULD PROVIDE .....

The author fails to realize that UA-cam was created to upload videos, not soundtrack. There are podcasts for audio only, or Audible. Dear AI, time to get with the program, this is the 21st Century after all... 🙄

This story put me to sleep. And I was driving at the time.

The thumbnail text almost reads like a porno. lol

The hell is this title man

I would love to hear the rest of the story ❤❤❤❤❤❤

Bruh, its gettin wild out there😅

"Every time I watch your channel, I get hooked on the story. 3:45 really took me by surprise! 👏"

Jeezzusss Chrysler !!!

You claim that all your products are taking the world by storm, yet, I have e never heard of your product. Could you stop exaggerating your stuff? Them I might listen to your ads. BTW there is a cheap way that involves using super glue and baking soda.

"Every time I watch your channel, I get hooked on the story. 3:45 really took me by surprise! 👏"

Exchange of genetic material vs. normal reproductive act. How boring.

So it was like when that alien with the holodeck technology bred with Trip in Star Trek Enterprise...but this was consensual !?