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And yeah, there’s gotta be a part 2 and maybe 3 to this. I’ll be seriously disappointed in you if not 🤷‍♂️

I really liked this. I felt a connection to Zelda. Kudos bro👍😎

I know this is just a story.. but Zelda’s golden hair is freaking amazing 🥰

What's with the dot dot dot BS? really ruins the story.. The repeated section & then just stopping while in the art gallery, not one of your better efforts, it feels poorly edited & not finished.. Maybe redo the upload & fix the problems most have mentioned.

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Another piece of trash. Do you morons know what a time line is??? First he is rescued, then he is on the planet. Next he is in working at their power/bio lab, he respects the queen. Then he is back on the explorer ship? Next he is meeting the queen???? WTF Try writing a story board with a viable time line and stick to it! This trash is pathetic!

Aaaawwwww

Although it is a déjà-vu this story it is nice with a beautiful alien woman and a engineer. They have been rescued just in time when the pirates wanted to keep them as prisoners. After they will fall in love ❤...

ALL that time for him just being a beta trying to think about what answer he will give her. We could have gotten a LOT more story if it hadn't drawn out so long. I totally agree his answer should be shown to be an important factor that you would spend time on but not when it takes up like 16% - 20% of the entire story with him just being wishy washy for a just ridiculous amount of time on the exact same topic no less. I could understand if it was like some huge meeting where several things get laid out in the story for different plot tangents but just one for all that time is just straight wrong lol. 🙄

A nice story indeed with such a sweet and very smart! She has been very lucky to find such a dependable person that soon became her new father 👍👍 !! Now together they have new planet to vist! I liked this story very such 👍👍👍 Just subscribed !!

Will she have to watch him grow old and die?

Nice story

A lack of punctuation makes this annoying to follow. The robot voice is no Sam Waterston.

That's it? Another unfinished story?

So the ship crashed, and the smugglers took the supplies and ran off. Then they left her and her daughter on the planet and flew off... How did they do that in a wrecked ship.

Why does this story not on this planet?

You were doing so well but plz stop repeating the story

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Silly are these stories. Doesn't anybody get laid

Now he just needs to get them pregnant

A knife ??? In space ?? Even WW1 (1914-1921) pilots were provided with a revolver.

Waiting for chapter 2 !

Chapter one?

nice melons

First

STARS HUM??????? WHERE?????? IN WHAT UNIVERSE?????

SO by BUYING the slave Gideon has encouraged the Slaver to go get another slave to sell???? Maybe from her own people like the people that sold Blacks in Africa???

After their joining, the simple answer was to marry each other.

Story sort of left us hanging????

A Very Good Story, Filled With Love.

Oak trees? Brush? The picture shows them in Arizona’s Four Corners area.

Very nice story well balanced and I am looking forward to more.

Great story ! 👍👍👍 I enjoyed it very much !!!

Great story.

Why in the hell would even get on the ship dumb ass

Lucky Gideon!

Great story!

I hope part 2 is coming soon. I liked it until I got to the end. I hate cliffhangers.....but good story so far.

Please quit putting dots in your stories!!!!

Fake and gay

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Very nice story

Bruh you horny ahhhh Ohio 😂😂😂😂😂

AI = Automatic dislike

I suppose that he is a widower and as such she filled a void in his life.

I bet the kind captain doesn't vote GOP

Lena needed shelter? Lena needed to be strapped into a seat before a crash.

As a Brazilian I am always astonished of how American stories never focus on taking a bath!

What do you want? He asked. A Left hand, drawn as well as my Right one, instead of this mess, she said.

I would venture to guess… hot alien chics show up needing male sperm, they had better have brought some dump trucks or some kind of alien super tanker. A half a billion young bucks would be all to happy to donate.