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I have two name options for my webtoon, but no one else seems right... 1- Diary of a dead girl (I feel like it's too generic) 2- Dear diary, I'm gonna die (I feel like it's too long

Your channel is so helpful! I am working on my second webtoon and I've always been good with the art, but making a believable story is my weakness. Thanks so much for these tips!

OMG YOUR JAMAICAN . OMG ME TOOOOOOO

the music is distracting

I love how you use colors, that avatar is so cute.

Super helpful advice!! And I feel you on posting schedules - I've learned not to promise I'll upload frequently because life is unpredictable 🤣 Take your time!!🖤

im getting heart attack bc how similar your sona is to nondi(OwOnekko)💀

I hate villains that don't have a sense of mystery with their goals I want the big reveal to be a surprise the best I've read ryt now us from gachiakuta

Have you ever forgotten a character you've made in your series or just forgot their personality

Thank you, this was super helpful! I’m loving the series so far and good luck with the next video!

I just found your page here and just like wow! Such beautiful art! And I liked how you explained things especially with the fun voices because it made things easier and fun to understand! I’m glad fun channels exist like these! Also were can I find this comic? It looks really pretty and the dialogue I saw had me very interested! :D

i hate when villains have a redemption arc and die right away after its done, overly annoying as hell. also thanks for the advice this is so underrated!

omg i absoluetley adore your style

✨I reallyyy loved this video!✨ I still don't really have the abilities to make my own webcomic so while i work on improving my art i can also spend that time flashing out my characters and stories better, and this kind of videos really help, especially yours that i find explained exceptionally well (also genuinely love the art style and the way you talk).❤ As for the villains I really struggles to give them proper motives fir their actions. Especially since the villains are the leading group in society and technically work to help the people but are also very strict about some set of religious rules. It's like a thinly veiled dictatorship where the supreme mind is the god they worship but i don't know how to give a reason to the population of that world to stick to such strict rules and even less reasons as for why the members of such group would stick to them😅 Also for me a convincing personality and story for villans are just so much harder to grasp

My comment getting mentioned from the last vid 😭 makes me so happy

600 views?? hello? Do these people not recognize greatness when they see it??

Wow I'm so glad I clicked on this! This is a really informative video and all your tips are so helpful, I definitely have a lot to think about when it comes to my main character. Love your art, it's so nice to see the process! In terms of villains, I think my main problem is that I try to show everyone's struggles and kind of justify where they're coming from but in doing so I blur the line and the actions of the villain doesn't have as much impact and/ show that it wasn't okay they did that despite their struggles? Not sure if I'm explaining it well but I would love to hear your thoughts!

5:12 The way I explain my world is interesting I think. So the beginning was of the comic there is no explanation, you follow two of the main characters as they grow closer together. We expience and see the world that they live in through them for a bit (the first like 1/3 or so.) I figured I’d have to start answering questions eventually, so the third main character finally joins the cast, she’s from the past (she died became a zombie watched 2 apocalypses unfold, got cured as a zombie, then attacked by and turned into a vampire. So she’s been around a while.) we learn a bit more about the world through her. But as strange as the world they are in is (as much as I love it) the world isn’t to important outside of societal structures. So I have a very soft world building in a (imma call it fantasy) setting. My other two comics take place at different times in their world as well, and the soft world building applies to both of them to, but the world is actually incredibly important in one of them, we learn about the world completely through the characters who are experiencing it for the first time in a way. They’ve lived in it their whole lives, but it was closed off from the outside. When one of the characters causes the 2nd apocalypse, goes into a coma for 3 years and wakes up, a zombie, in a completely unfamiliar setting to the one he last saw. He and his (found family) brother discover a journal written by an unknown person detailing some of his discoveries (for plot convenience shh) about the world they’ve been kept away from. They discover a lot on their own as the story goes on but they follow the journal as a guide of what is and isn’t safe (it’s not always accurate as they’ll learn but it comes close.) the last comic of mine the world never even gets brought up honestly, all soft world building and revealing necessary information of the opportunity presents itself. I’ve always kinda hated world exposition, it always takes me away from the world I’m genuinely curious about, so I really avoid that in my writing unless it’s necessary. If I can find a dialogue or scene to show it without exposition I do XD

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good video, just followed you, art super cute

im so shocked this dosent have more comments! this popped up on my feed and your art style caught my attention so I clicked not really looking at the title, I'm really glad I did I've been thinking about making a webcomic/webtoon for a while now but it looked super intimidating this is a super helpful start and super fun to watch!! also i love watching you draw its so interesting ur art is great!!! i will for sure check out some of your comics!!

This was great advice! Loads of useful info, thank you!

Thanks a lot! That was very useful!

I find it difficult to write engaging villains

Thanks a lot!

your art style is AMAZING! I love how vibrant and expressive it is, but its also soft and comfy looking

With character writing and mostly design sometimes I get really reluctant to change certain aspects and concepts that don't work as well as I thought they would even if in the end it does more good for the character to change it.

I find that its more difficult to write the first episode so i might just start writing episode 2 first.

With character designs I find it hard to pick out outfits that I deem cool enough

Thank God your back missed you sim 😊

Okay so I have a problem with trying to get my wife cast of characters to not all have the same traits I possess, because then they all come out the same, any advice?

I just got your video on my front page and OMG YOUR CHARACTER IS SO CUUUUTE

you got yourself a fan , very excited to hear more of your tips 🥰🥰

Got called out in the first few seconds xD Oh yeah, I can tell I'm gonna like this video!

UA-cam recommended doing it’s job for once LOL just found you and already loving ur content! 🥰

I find it hard to intertwine characters stories.

Honestly, this video came on my recommended page just in time as i'm prepping for a webcomic myself and it's very daunting. Will be tuning in! By the way, i absolutely love your sona!! They look so cool and i'd love to draw them :D

Your avatar design is very similar to OwONekko's. Did you take inspiration from her or something?

One part about writing/designing characters is making them different, some may look a lot alike or the hairstyles just don't go that well with the personality, sometimes the characters can look really different but then their personalities are alike in a few ways which doesn't make them their own person This video was really helpful and educational, your art is really cool!! :DD

Nice video!

Love the video! I find giving characters, esp main characters negative personality traits difficult. Any tips with that?

Cool video! Hope it doesn't sound weird, but you sound like Garnet from steven universe :D

This is the first video of yours I'm seeing I'm not far in but I have to say I LOVE YOUR INTRO SO MUCH THE STAR AND THEN THE ART INSIDE IT HAS SO MUCH CHARM

I can honestly say that the general concept of my webcomic project has been done before, mainly through things like Farscape, Tenchi Muyo or Guardians of the Galaxy, etc. I could easily name a few other genres to cross it with, besides just your typical space opera or science fantasy tropes. It is fascinating to consider their roots in things like westerns or pirate adventures, when you think about it logically.

My comics name has some layered meanings. Thanks for this video 😊

Thanks for this 🫶

how does this have under 1k views and 16k likes?

I’m at the beginning of my journey

Thank you for this! Ive been looking for something like this to help with my own fancomic and STRUGGLE with plotting. THANK YOU! Def subscribing!

0:07 ur avatar reminds me of this other youtuber's named RAMDARAM its really cute :DD also u just got a new sub <33