The lyrics are way too straight to the point it's less of a song and more of a cringy emo poem would suggest making it a little more obscure with multiple meanings and give it a couple repeating verses to make it catchy and singable cause ain't no damn way anybody will be able to actually remember this whole song and actually sing it
@@ReaperGames65you can have it be a little straight to the point but you need a repeating verse in there something to throw in between each set of new lyrics to make it sort of hook the audience if it's just different lyrics all the way through it will lose its hype quickly
@@ReaperGames65listen to the song you have playing in the background how it has a repeating verse between each set of new lyrics it helps keep the audience hooked
@@Fishlipsandbabyhands Ik man but I wanted it to be something new break the bondrys of moderns and create something new that no one has seen in a long time
@@ReaperGames65'm not telling you not to sing it, I'm just giving tips on how to get attention to a song, if it isn't catchy and at least a little singable no one will care about it but you can still sing it if you want to, it won't hurt.
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Bro jey uso is not in the bloodline
It isn’t WWE real life based
Not bad
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I got bakura
10/10
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Hey lol
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Bruh Who is this guy at November I only know the above mentioned anime gx and 5ds
This is really good
I gotta go back to my original ps4 to get my new character
Impressive...
The lyrics are way too straight to the point it's less of a song and more of a cringy emo poem would suggest making it a little more obscure with multiple meanings and give it a couple repeating verses to make it catchy and singable cause ain't no damn way anybody will be able to actually remember this whole song and actually sing it
That’s kinda how I like my rhythm I want it to be straight to the point and have people focus on one thing not multiple to me it loses the feeling
@@ReaperGames65you can have it be a little straight to the point but you need a repeating verse in there something to throw in between each set of new lyrics to make it sort of hook the audience if it's just different lyrics all the way through it will lose its hype quickly
@@ReaperGames65listen to the song you have playing in the background how it has a repeating verse between each set of new lyrics it helps keep the audience hooked
@@Fishlipsandbabyhands Ik man but I wanted it to be something new break the bondrys of moderns and create something new that no one has seen in a long time
@@ReaperGames65'm not telling you not to sing it, I'm just giving tips on how to get attention to a song, if it isn't catchy and at least a little singable no one will care about it but you can still sing it if you want to, it won't hurt.
This 😏👍
Id give it a 4 out of 10 if im being honest keep at it though
First low vote but good feed back thanks
10/10
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Nice hope u like
39 now I’m so sorry 😢
It’s all good 😊
Congrats dude!!!! Trust me never give you'll become better and will more subs with time
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That’s really good
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On a scale of 0 to ten 0 the best 0/10
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An art room table brought me hear.
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naruto bro
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Luffy
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Luffy bro
awsome
MELIODAS BABY
glad u like it
Gokuuu
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Hard work is useless for people who don't believe in themselves - Uzumaki Naruto
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I am goku
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I got naruto
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Im nezuko
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