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I play cozy games and do scriptwriting streams. I post videos every Wednesdays and Fridays. I stream on twitch Monday - Wednesday, Follow Here: www.twitch.tv/chrisetheabyss If you want to support , tip, and or commission me, Click here: ko-fi.com/chrisetheabyss
Screenwrite An Adaptation With Me Deathnote Pt 7
We write the flashback scene where Light uses the Deathnote for the first time while talking about things I wish thought of sooner, my computer falling to the floor, and how to make a scene sinister without showing something graphic.
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Intro 0:00
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Trying New Scriptwriting Programs 0:26
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Trying New Stream Setup 2:06
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Rules 5:57
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Reading What We Did Last Time 8:16
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Correcting Last Stream's Writing 11:49
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2 + 2 Theory 12:42
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My Computer Fell Off My Desk 14:34
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Reading The Manga Pages 16:40
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Planning The Scenes 19:25
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Writing Ryuk Talking About Humanity 22:38
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Haunting Of Hill House Reference 33:20
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Making The Scene More Sinister 37:14
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Almost At The Writing Goal 53:11
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How To Write A Flash Back 53:47
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Writing Light's First Unaliving 58:01
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The Dude is Unalived 1:46:40
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Reading What We've Done 1:50:36
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Final Statements 1:56:09
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Intro 0:00
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Trying New Scriptwriting Programs 0:26
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Trying New Stream Setup 2:06
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Rules 5:57
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Reading What We Did Last Time 8:16
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Correcting Last Stream's Writing 11:49
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2 + 2 Theory 12:42
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My Computer Fell Off My Desk 14:34
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Reading The Manga Pages 16:40
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Planning The Scenes 19:25
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Writing Ryuk Talking About Humanity 22:38
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Haunting Of Hill House Reference 33:20
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Making The Scene More Sinister 37:14
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Almost At The Writing Goal 53:11
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How To Write A Flash Back 53:47
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Writing Light's First Unaliving 58:01
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The Dude is Unalived 1:46:40
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Reading What We've Done 1:50:36
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Final Statements 1:56:09
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Thank you. Love the game and doing different voices for the characters. And would love to play your next game whenever you make it. P.S There is a sound bug that I think the temple of time causes that turn up the volume on all sound effects to the point it sounds like grinding gears.
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Music for the opening by Trent Reznor from Nine Inch Nails, a la Se7en style. Highly recommend it.
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As an adaptation you should be thinking about structure; addition and subtraction. If for example you think the story is fine, but a little too sympathetic to Light, you might add a scene that demonstrates a flaw in his reasoning. Not to undermine his intelligence, but to show he's myopic. Maybe he overhears somebody talking about being bullied, thinks he knows exactly who the bully is, and finds a way to get back at them, only to show apathy upon learning later he mistakenly targeted the wrong person. See Light is not interested in due process. His operations are inherently unfair and unreasonable, but this is basically never touched on (in the anime at least). Or you could not just conceal Light in the title sequence, you have the option to try treating the reveal that Light is Kira as a legitimate plot twist, and seeing if you could make that work, playing around with exactly how long before that information is revealed to the audience. Does it have to be right away, because his thinking, and the rules are too important? Or can some of that be shown in flashbacks, after the reveal? Ther are a number of errors as I see it. I don't know if you ever correct this (I listened, but I didn't watch) it's mismatched. "Mixmatched" is not a word. You give the age of a character so the production knows what type of person to cast. Ryuk has lines, so stating an age range would not be out of the question. With the caveat that he's actually ageless. The three fingers rule doesn't sounds like a one you should take too seriously. You use proper nouns excessively, at least in this first video. If you've established what you're talking about, whether you're talking about a book, a hand or a person, you can abbreviate by saying "it", "he", or "she" in subsequent sentences, so it flows together better. You wouldn't necessarily script a title sequence. No reason you couldn't, but if you're just the writer, then you probably won't. It's usually better you not truncate sequences either, so that the script runs in realtime with events as they'll play out on screen. - So you can't just say "Japanese reporter talks about mass murder" you have to say exactly what the reporter says. It's debatable whether or not you can really "insinuate" the presence of a specific character. I think it's probably fine if it's ambiguous but also going to be obvious later, but Ryuk's hand is not any hand, Ryuk's smile is not just any smile. If you're watching this it's going to be obvious who it is, if you've seen Ryuk. Hinting at it is a waste of time. You can pique the reader's curiosity first, there's no point beating around the bush forever. You might as well say "It was Ryuk's smile." Or whatever. Good luck.
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Thank you so much. I'm really glad it inspired you and helped you even if it was just a nudge.
If you want to chat with me live, My stream have a stream tonight at 6 PM PST / 9 PM EST hope to see you there : www.twitch.tv/chrisetheabyss
The main thing I don't agree with hardcore stans on is the setting. No matter what _anybody_ says Death Note is not a story that "only works" in Japan. The main thing they cite is "shinigami" which is really telling because two seconds of research indicates that these creatures have as much in common with the western concept of a grim reaper as they do with japanese folklore. The shinigami from Death Note, are not a thing. Everything else they seem to think is inextricable from Japanese culture shows either a narrow view of the rest of the world or an overblown sense of uniqueness about Japan. (I suspect both, as the concepts are clearly related.) In case no one noticed all of the detectives come from an English bording school, and the narrative shoehorns in the American President, in addition to several FBI agents. I personally can't think of any legitimate reasons an English language adaptation would adhere so closely to the Japanese setting other than to pander to fans who cried foul, when that should be of least concern.
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