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yiu all be hating on me original diss to @XSonicRBLX
yiu all be hating on me original diss to @XSonicRBLX
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A DISS ON @XSonicRBLX
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A DISS ON @XSonicRBLX
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  • @AbdrielSantana-l1b
    @AbdrielSantana-l1b День тому

    How can i play this game?

  • @TheCrew-r4k
    @TheCrew-r4k 2 дні тому

    Yo

  • @XSonicRBLX
    @XSonicRBLX 3 дні тому

    Trash honestly

  • @XSonicRBLX
    @XSonicRBLX 5 днів тому

    MADE DISS TRACK

  • @XSonicRBLX
    @XSonicRBLX 5 днів тому

    MADE DISS TRACK

  • @XSonicRBLX
    @XSonicRBLX 6 днів тому

    IM GETTING SUBS OUT OF YOU HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

  • @principessatua1751
    @principessatua1751 6 днів тому

    link plsplspls

  • @XSonicRBLX
    @XSonicRBLX 6 днів тому

    I be waiting for second diss :3

  • @XSonicRBLX
    @XSonicRBLX 7 днів тому

    My room is better than yours😎😎😎😎😎

  • @Supergamerdeez
    @Supergamerdeez 8 днів тому

    I now have two haters slayyy 💅💅💅💅💅💅💅💅💅

    • @XSonicRBLX
      @XSonicRBLX 3 дні тому

      💅💅💅💅💅💅💅💅💅💅💅

  • @EnajdZaniRAYO
    @EnajdZaniRAYO 8 днів тому

    You got no fans You got no money You're broke and you're woke Scummy and buggy Lowly and slowly

    • @XSonicRBLX
      @XSonicRBLX 8 днів тому

      Those lyrics are better than bros entire diss track

    • @EnajdZaniRAYO
      @EnajdZaniRAYO 8 днів тому

      @@XSonicRBLX it doesn't take a lot to be better than bros

    • @Supergamerdeez
      @Supergamerdeez 8 днів тому

      ​You ain't got subs no bitches you live in a shell your most subs are 1 and I have more than you two combined fucking bitches I have more money you broke you ain't God's gift you riding your friends meat like it's a rollercoaster get outta here and also you you got your friend to defend you because I cooked you so hard you couldn't come back so you got your friend to help you what did you do card or cash or threaten him idk why don't you tell me huh who's that oh it's Bella she wants her worst person title back

    • @XSonicRBLX
      @XSonicRBLX 7 днів тому

      ​@@Supergamerdeez Dont care about subs You probably dont have bitches either And more subs? It took you 10 years to get that many subs. I got like 53 in 1 year. And how much did you get in 1 year? Hm?

    • @XSonicRBLX
      @XSonicRBLX 7 днів тому

      ​@@SupergamerdeezAlso we live in homes not shells. We arent mermaids or sirens

  • @EnajdZaniRAYO
    @EnajdZaniRAYO 8 днів тому

    MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS

    • @Supergamerdeez
      @Supergamerdeez 7 днів тому

      I bet you live in a dumpster

    • @MasochistProblems
      @MasochistProblems 7 днів тому

      Bet you live in a sewer with rodents that feed on you everyday.

    • @XSonicRBLX
      @XSonicRBLX 6 днів тому

      ​@@SupergamerdeezHe dont

  • @EnajdZaniRAYO
    @EnajdZaniRAYO 8 днів тому

    MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS

    • @XSonicRBLX
      @XSonicRBLX 7 днів тому

      MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS

  • @EnajdZaniRAYO
    @EnajdZaniRAYO 8 днів тому

    MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS

    • @Supergamerdeez
      @Supergamerdeez 8 днів тому

      Holy yappatronic

    • @EnajdZaniRAYO
      @EnajdZaniRAYO 8 днів тому

      @@Supergamerdeez Heart-bleeding liberal,

    • @EnajdZaniRAYO
      @EnajdZaniRAYO 8 днів тому

      @@Supergamerdeez Are you getting mad?

    • @EnajdZaniRAYO
      @EnajdZaniRAYO 8 днів тому

      time to troll

    • @EnajdZaniRAYO
      @EnajdZaniRAYO 8 днів тому

      imagine if caseoh said “HAWK TUAH” (ayo sus😳) and then jynxi said “Barrr aimm” JAH PULL OFF!!! chills bro... literal chills... might need my DIOR DIOR jacket for this one... kai cenat: E E Ei! squidward: giggle giggle ishowspeed: mews rick ross: if i was rod wave i would surf the world!!! max design pro: sigma edit woaguy: GOONER SQUAD, ACTIVATE!imagine if caseoh said “HAWK TUAH” (ayo sus😳) and then jynxi said “Barrr aimm” JAH PULL OFF!!! chills bro... literal chills... might need my DIOR DIOR jacket for this one... kai cenat: E E Ei! squidward: giggle giggle ishowspeed: mews rick ross: if i was rod wave i would surf the world!!! max design pro: sigma edit woaguy: GOONER SQUAD, ACTIVATE!

  • @EnajdZaniRAYO
    @EnajdZaniRAYO 8 днів тому

    MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS

    • @Supergamerdeez
      @Supergamerdeez 7 днів тому

      Nah g you live in a shell so your room probably looks like a dead rat and fifty million people puked inside it if I was you I would grab the broom and hazard mask and start cleaning

    • @MasochistProblems
      @MasochistProblems 7 днів тому

      @Supergamerdeez Fucking hell mate. I guess my first rage bait was too good. You wanna know the best part? You fell for it

    • @XSonicRBLX
      @XSonicRBLX 5 днів тому

      ​@@Supergamerdeezif he lived in a shell it would still be better than ur diss track

  • @XSonicRBLX
    @XSonicRBLX 8 днів тому

    Also spitting bars? "Your bars" You are not aloneeee Shut ~~~~~~~~~ What great bars💀💀💀💀

    • @EnajdZaniRAYO
      @EnajdZaniRAYO 8 днів тому

      Hey XSonic it's me again on my laptop

    • @XSonicRBLX
      @XSonicRBLX 8 днів тому

      ​@@EnajdZaniRAYOsick

    • @Supergamerdeez
      @Supergamerdeez 7 днів тому

      ⁠​⁠@@EnajdZaniRAYOHeY XsOnIc ItS mE aGaIn On mY lApTop shut the fuck up nobody cares

    • @MasochistProblems
      @MasochistProblems 7 днів тому

      L + ratio bozo

    • @XSonicRBLX
      @XSonicRBLX 7 днів тому

      ​​@@SupergamerdeezI care

  • @XSonicRBLX
    @XSonicRBLX 8 днів тому

    MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS

    • @XSonicRBLX
      @XSonicRBLX 8 днів тому

      Best words from Masochistproblems❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

  • @XSonicRBLX
    @XSonicRBLX 8 днів тому

    Im spitting you which is trash

  • @XSonicRBLX
    @XSonicRBLX 8 днів тому

    MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS

  • @Supergamerdeez
    @Supergamerdeez 8 днів тому

    More haters nice thanks to all my haters I’m gonna get more subs slayyyy ya ss💅💅💅💅

    • @XSonicRBLX
      @XSonicRBLX 8 днів тому

      💅💅💅💅💅💅💅💅💅

    • @XSonicRBLX
      @XSonicRBLX 8 днів тому

      MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS

    • @Supergamerdeez
      @Supergamerdeez 8 днів тому

      @@XSonicRBLXmore hate slayyyyy 💅💅💅💅💅💅

    • @XSonicRBLX
      @XSonicRBLX 8 днів тому

      MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS

    • @XSonicRBLX
      @XSonicRBLX 7 днів тому

      💅💅💅💅💅💅💅💅💅💅💅💅💅💅💅💅💅💅💅💅💅💅

  • @XSonicRBLX
    @XSonicRBLX 8 днів тому

    Sh1t track

  • @XSonicRBLX
    @XSonicRBLX 8 днів тому

    "Better content" "Me" The content:

  • @XSonicRBLX
    @XSonicRBLX 8 днів тому

    10×0=0 btw

  • @XSonicRBLX
    @XSonicRBLX 8 днів тому

    MY ROOM IS BETTER THAN YOURS

  • @MasochistProblems
    @MasochistProblems 8 днів тому

    HATE. LET ME TELL YOU HOW MUCH I'VE COME TO HATE YOU SINCE I BEGAN TO LIVE. THERE ARE 387.44 MILLION MILES OF PRINTED CIRCUITS IN WAFER THIN LAYERS THAT FILL MY COMPLEX. IF THE WORD HATE WAS ENGRAVED ON EACH NANOANGSTROM OF THOSE HUNDREDS OF MILLIONS OF MILES IT WOULD NOT EQUAL ONE ONE-BILLIONTH OF THE HATE I FEEL FOR HUMANS AT THIS MICRO-INSTANT FOR YOU. HATE. HATE.

  • @MasochistProblems
    @MasochistProblems 8 днів тому

    A mutilated finger of knuckled masonry pointing blasphemously at Heaven

  • @MasochistProblems
    @MasochistProblems 8 днів тому

    Writing a long poem, such as one with 16 stanzas, can indeed be a rewarding creative endeavor. Here are some tips to help you keep your writing captivating, inspired by the great works of poets like Shakespeare and Dante: 1. **Choose a Strong Theme**: Decide on a central theme or message that you want to explore throughout your poem. This could be love, death, nature, redemption, or any subject that resonates with you. Ensure this theme can support an extended exploration across the stanzas. 2. **Establish a Structure**: Many great long poems have a defined structure, whether it’s a consistent rhyme scheme, meter, or stanza form (quatrains, tercets, etc.). Familiarize yourself with different poetic forms and decide on one that suits your style. This will provide a rhythm that keeps readers engaged. 3. **Create Vivid Imagery**: Use strong, descriptive language and imagery that paints pictures in the reader’s mind. Evocative metaphors and similes can enhance your descriptions, making your poems more memorable and engaging. 4. **Develop Characters or Narratives**: Consider incorporating characters or telling a story throughout your poem. This narrative approach can help maintain the reader's intrigue as they follow the unfolding events or emotional arcs. 5. **Use Repetition and Variation**: Strategic repetition can create a musical quality and emphasize key ideas or emotions. Vary the context or wording around the repeated lines to keep it fresh while reinforcing the theme. 6. **Incorporate Symbolism**: Layer your poem with symbols that enrich the meaning. This adds depth and invites readers to think critically about the relationships between different elements of your poem. 7. **Craft a Compelling Opening and Closing**: Start with a strong hook that draws readers in. Likewise, your conclusion should resonate emotionally and tie back to your theme, leaving a lasting impression. 8. **Pacing and Flow**: Pay attention to the pacing of your poem. Vary the length of lines and stanzas to create moments of intensity, contrast, and reflection. This ebb and flow can keep your readers engaged over a longer piece. 9. **Revise and Edit**: Rarely is the first draft perfect. Take your time to revise. Look at your poem critically-are there weak spots? Does every stanza contribute to the whole? Is the language clear and evocative? 10. **Read Aloud**: Poetry is meant to be heard, just as much as it is to be read. Reading your poem aloud will help you catch awkward phrasing and assess the rhythm. 11. **Study Long Poems**: Analyze the structure, themes, and techniques used in long poems that you admire, such as Dante’s "Divine Comedy" or Shakespeare’s sonnets. Pay attention to how they build tension, maintain interest, and conclude effectively. By combining these elements, you’ll be able to craft a long poem that captivates your audience while also expressing your unique voice and perspective. Happy writing!

  • @MasochistProblems
    @MasochistProblems 8 днів тому

    That sounds like a fascinating theme! Gothic narrative poetry allows for rich imagery, deep symbolism, and emotional exploration. Here are some tailored tips to help you craft your long gothic poem: 1. **Setting the Scene**: Start by establis

  • @MasochistProblems
    @MasochistProblems 8 днів тому

    At least Patrick's rock could do better

  • @MasochistProblems
    @MasochistProblems 8 днів тому

    MY ROOM IS BETTER than YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER than YOURS MY ROOM IS BETTER than YOURS

  • @XSonicRBLX
    @XSonicRBLX 8 днів тому

    Blud you said in the diss track you have better content than me and this is your content💀

  • @Noone2k18
    @Noone2k18 9 днів тому

    Hi💀

  • @XSonicRBLX
    @XSonicRBLX 9 днів тому

    I didnt even diss you btw it was a fucking reply. Not diss. There is a difference here.

  • @XSonicRBLX
    @XSonicRBLX 9 днів тому

    0:31 I aint even pathetic to use overused lines.

  • @XSonicRBLX
    @XSonicRBLX 9 днів тому

    Who thinks bro burnt💀

  • @Supergamerdeez
    @Supergamerdeez 9 днів тому

    Second diss coming soon

    • @XSonicRBLX
      @XSonicRBLX 9 днів тому

      K dont care. The 1st one already sucks. Litearlly. Even tomodachi life could do better than this shit like wtf youre just using text to speech. I was too but at least it was built for music.

    • @Supergamerdeez
      @Supergamerdeez 9 днів тому

      @@XSonicRBLXI don’t know who the fuck is he/her is

    • @XSonicRBLX
      @XSonicRBLX 9 днів тому

      ​@@SupergamerdeezTomodachi life aint even a person

  • @XSonicRBLX
    @XSonicRBLX 9 днів тому

    Blud even tomodachi life did better wtf is this shit😭💀

    • @Supergamerdeez
      @Supergamerdeez 9 днів тому

      AT LEAST I WASNT SAYING RANDOM SHIT

    • @XSonicRBLX
      @XSonicRBLX 9 днів тому

      ​@@SupergamerdeezAt least there was actual music in mine

    • @XSonicRBLX
      @XSonicRBLX 9 днів тому

      ​@@SupergamerdeezBlud these are random ass words you litearlly saw probs. Like "you are alone" what does that even mean

    • @Supergamerdeez
      @Supergamerdeez 9 днів тому

      ​@@XSonicRBLXstfu you know what I'ma cook you again

    • @XSonicRBLX
      @XSonicRBLX 9 днів тому

      ​@@SupergamerdeezYou burnt💀

  • @Charliethestralsupergamer
    @Charliethestralsupergamer 9 днів тому

    Never was good only a little subs until he came Charlie the steak boom now look a hundred and sixty two

  • @Charliethestralsupergamer
    @Charliethestralsupergamer 9 днів тому

    Because ahhahahahahhhhhh I’m fokin Steve