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I don't understand why. Why do you bring a story to a head with another Alien threat at Earth's doorstep then leave the story unfinished? You created a Climax but you never reached an end (Resolution) of the story. Instead, you drove towards a 2nd Climax and then shut it down. You resolved and ended the first conflict but the second conflict? Never a Climax, a Falling Action nor a Resolution (ending). I find this story as not a story at all. If you're using "story" in your channel's name then I expect a story. Not this unfinished whatever you call it. Wasting my time so I'll initiate the UA-cam protocol "don't recommend channel" so your channel never graces my recommendation list again.

Shame the story never ended, how lame. I do hope you plan to continue this story, because right now I feel like I've read only book one of a series.

At 9:13, the story begins to repeat anew.

How come the probe withstood all that humans could throw at it, but their space ships were beaten almost with ease! Also AI is garbage. Decent enough story, also nice to know where (Luther) Vandross is!

And the story is not finished.

At 21:00 the story repeats the origin of Artifact 0...Why!?

Plese proof read. There's a repetition of almost 5 minutes.

Its odd that all of the central characters, positions of leadership for Earth seemed to be filled by women? That is not very likely, is the author of this story demonstrating some bias, making a political statement?

Not bad but still sucky ai.

Nice story

This jumps from one story to another! One minute, Ethan and Lily are in a forest, the next its Riley and a group of kids on a space ship. Such ashame as both parts zeem like they would have been good stories 😢

Приятного аппетита 🍵🍵

Omg

This interesting story follows siblings Ethan and Lily as they survive the alien environment. Suddenly, jarringly, Ridley is the main protagonist as she takes over the Aethion space ship with a crowd of freed human children And with no further mention of Ethan or his sister Lily the story ends.. ???

Confusing! Several unconnected stories.

fingers are flying; tension is palpable; and status is as always, open to interpretation

Totally idiotic AI shit.

There were a few awkward words that seemed very disjointed in context, proofread / proof listen before posting. The Pronunciation and spelling of the alien names varied greatly during the story as well. DO BETTER. And then the story just ends with out a proper conclusion.

Skippy The Magnificent and his Awesomeness will protect us.

Next part?

Chen? Rodriguez? Not sure I can do this story if there are no familiar names!

M U LT I P L E S P E L L I N G E R R O R S!! "Plada Corps"????? "NASA stepped forward"?? How can an agency step? "A mirror stepped in" WTF!!!!! Now there's walking mirrors?? The energy field "potted"?? How does that work, exactly?