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I sometimes wonder if all fanfiction writers forget kashina has violet eyes lol

Hey Could you tell me if this was a good what if! What if naruto was in poppy playtime In this, what if Naruto's a high level executive at poppy Playtime Who has a daughter Who knew who the experiments they were doing But didn't know They were performed on children And well trying to reveal the truth Him and his daughter get turned into monsters. P s if you don't know what poppy playtime is , I should just you look it up

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I LIKE TURTLES

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If I were to have the powers to use to assassin, Creed characters abilities of choosing the abilities from assassins Creed origins in assassin Creed Valhalla

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Heart of a Demon By: David Jaxon

Goken Ryu =iron dragon not iron fist

Sad really, most of the time in the battle was spent detailing people instead of just naming them. This is why there are so many unfinished stories, these people burn themselves out with writing out all the minor details that it starts to overwhelm them with the redundancy of it all. This is a Naruto fan-fic based story so anyone that comes to listen to the story should know who's who in Naruto so describing every minute detail in Gaaras appearance wasn't necessary. As soon as sand was mentioned i automatically assumed it would be Gaara, an essay on his description later confirmed it before it was even completed. SMH

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I hope their is a part 2 to this

Man shikamaru vs shino fight would be interesting watch to bad it never happened in the show.

I like naruto what ifs where he leaves the village and embraces the demon in him. ❤

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In these stories, it never occurs to the fourth. That maybe just having Naruto seen as a kid instead of announcing that he has the fox in him and the treaty mess a hero. Why do that and other people have written it up? Well, he didn't want him no one. His heritage that he's his dad. Because it would maybe go to Naruto's head. It's contradictory, you want him to be seen as a hero yet. You don't want him knowing who you are because it would go to his head and some of the stories are written up as the fourth say and he loved his son more than anything?? Except the village! And in this story, I don't know why the author changed how it starts that it's in Kushyna. Instead of coming down from the mountains, I don't see how that enhanced the story by changing of the firm belief if it's not enhancing the story, leave it alone. A bit of trivia, the kyubi is not a deman. It is a force of nature and embodiment of Chakra. What a lot of people say it's a demon is meant to be a slur and derogatory toward the Beaju.

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Okay, it stated, he's on The Verge of adolescence. When do people think puberty starts because you're not adolescent at 1213 years old puberty starts between 11 to 14 years old, everyone's wanting to keep the development of sexual characteristics to a minimum. They want to keep them younger. I'm sorry I started working at 14. I'd already been flipping haybell since I was 9. By the time I was 16 I went to work in the Mat 18. I've done moved out of my house. At twenty one I'd done met the woman I would marry and be married Over 20 years I'd already been with her 6 years before. I even got married to the woman. So a lot of these people they won't you to stay a child until you're done. Got a Gray beard in your mom's basement. Grow up people don't develop as slow as they make them out to online and in the press. Hell, I was already in the National Guard when I was 17. I'm wondering is just that these millennial generational. People think you're supposed to be a child until you're in your 30s. One thing about this story that bothers me is they built him up.But then I have naggy toy him in the dirt again.What the f*** is the author aiming at with this?I'm sorry I just don't get the whole thorn.People down after you build them up or had them worked hard to better themselves. I mean, we're 6 and a 1/2 hours into the story. And he hasn't even taken his first declass. Mission, it's all been training or discovery. Or whatever, but for the God's sake, 6 and a 1/2 hours and he's gotten nowhere except making yourself better, but not good enough to beat nadji. I want really bugs. Me is Naji's fighting style. Isn't that good? All you have to do is slap his wrist out of the way to stop him. But nobody ever does that except on very few fan fictions. They'll have it. We're Naruto figures out slap his wrist inside so that they don't actually connect. Or block with his hands so they only hit the same place over and over. And a lot of people will have the kyubi's healing factor healing up with no scars yet the healing factor never comes into play, even in Canon when he fought Negi. Why?

Okay, I had made comments. I deleted them because I found why the story has big old plot holes and why it seems like a lot. Unnecessary changes were made. It starts out they talk about his father's name. Being minotaur, but later it pops up Arashi. Somebody went back and corrected some of the names. But won't you know who Naruto's father's name really is? You're a lot of information that aint quite linked up with this story is available. And I asked, why would they do all these unnecessary changes if there are already to the point where you know Naruto's father's name? Because you know the parents were married and stuff like that was because this story was written before we knew Naruto's father's name. Somebody went back and changed it in a few places. They changed his mother's name to the right name. But. The guy that wrote this story wrote it before you knew any of that and you knew they were married and all this other story's good the story's good. I wish it went through a re. Write, so all this actually made more sense like this story was written before you realize. D the fox really isn't a demon? The fox is A. Force of nature in the embodiment of Chakra, but there's nothing really demonic about it other than it's angry because it senses humans, anger, greed and all the deadly sands and humans. So the fox kind of gets upset about that, but faithfully the fox is just another really powerful entity that feels hurt by humanity and he was controlled to attack the village. I was wondering why they went throughout of it. Being a demon and coming down from the mountains when it was controlled to attack the villages because this story was written before. We knew all that. So sorry for if anybody read my previous comments before. I got around to deleting tbecause. I was going by the names of the people in the story. And if you knew their names, you knew the sacred event events. But now I understand somebody went back and corrected the names because they call them two different names and didn't know the Sequence of events.

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Part 2 please

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More pics FROM CHRISHASS.

what happened to his mom?????

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Please let Sajin be in this story. I make this comment. It's a bit of trivia. It's not meant as a criticism to this author but most of these fan fiction authors have it wrong. The reason why is an early fan fiction said it was an illusion that she was using.It's not that was a misunderstanding and everybody who wrote sleeves.Fan fictions keep on propagating a false statement from the original stuff. They say Tsunade uses ginjitsu. She doesn't. It's cellular manipulation that's tied to the diamond on her forehead. It's why she looks so much older when she gets drained of chakra fighting pain. She's basically burning her life force and it makes her look younger.But it's not an illusion.It's manipulating to body cells.

OK, this is not Naruto, this is Ranma 1/2, they need to change the title, at least the part I've listened to. I don't know how people think it's enjoyable to start the story with such a gorfast and great tragedy right off. The start seriously. Do some people enjoy being made? Feel miserable by reading this stuff. This story Definitely isn't for me. Before someone says if you don't like it don't rate it. I have news for that astronaut. Comment cause I've got it several times how do you know if you like it or not unless you read some of it? And yes, I am stopping this one. It's just not for me. I'm sure there's someone out there. And joys it. I wish to author all the luck, but this story just kind of made me feel s***** reading it or listening to it at the beginning. So much so I didn't want to continue. And again it's my feelings in my opinion, nobody else has to ascribe to them.

Need a part 2

u realy really like details

Please make part 2 this story is very good 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

Anyone know the name of this fan fic?

Part 2 please

Pin please

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What's the name of the author

1500 veiws and only I liked it? Great story but the sound quality is grotesque at best. No quality oe effort put in at all.

Yes, yes, I know. This is a second post that I've made, but while I'm giving power the nerf to f*** out of the power, he already head seriously. That just makes the story drag out unnecessarily. Why if you're going to give him power, give him power if we're going to change the way the power works? That's fine too I don't like it when I strip him of one ability to give him another but this is the worst of all worlds. You took his healing this.The only thing keeping him alive.At least at this point in the story. I truly wish they'd stop turning his eyes. Read that has become the most cliche color they turned his eyes red. Sometimes they turned his hair red. Which I don't mind so much. As mother had red hair, but when they make his hair black. Why can't we have him with the different eyes? With them still blue, I may be 5 of them that I'll listen to on this site that left his eye color alone, but gave him the other eyes the slighted, like the foxes or they gave him the app powers from another family, but they left his eyes blue. But most of the time they change again.I'm getting sick of the color red because of this.I never thought I would but everybody wants sasuke's eyes or the rinnegon I just think it would be cool if he got those different eyes that they stayed blue. I do like this story and a lot that the author understands or puts into print.Print that first you get respect.Then you become the hoeka gay all this.I want to become a hokage to get respect.It doesn't happen that way.You get respect, You become strong, You get trust and then they appoint you hokage. Okay, I'm 2 and a 1/2 hours into this. And he hasn't done the second test yet. They haven't announced the teams yet. Come on, author. Why is the most boring parts of the story being dragged out?

Even if the kyuubi dies, it will reform years down the road. The whole thing about it being tied to Naruto soul and if he dies he will take the kayubi to the after life, that was something that a fan fiction author wrote early on in the Naruto stories, but no, the Kyuubi truly will not die if Naruto does. Why do you think it always wants to escape? Why do people think it tries to get out of the seal? It will not die with Naruto for f*** sake. People stop saying it will die and stop having people say that in the council meetings cause that's just one reason to kill Naruto. It's better that people don't understand what's going as opposed to giving people a reason to do it. I doubt the hokage wants to give the council another reason to kill Naruto. So why would he tell them that if Naruto dies the kyuubi dies? The Hokage, more than likely would tell them that If Naruto does the kyyubi is freed. Another thing, why doesn't kyuubi correct people's terminology? It's not a demon. That is a human slur. It is a Chakra embodiment. It is a force of nature. It never was in the story a demon. People called it a demon to insult it.

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how 2010 fanfiction can you get.

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