While I found the video informative as a biography, I feel like it lacked analysis of the artist and art itself. Like when Malfatti was critiqued as a “caricature artist” it would have been interesting to linger on the art itself, give some examples on why that critique was given, a survey of art at the time/place that contrasts with Malfatti, and maybe even some of your own analysis that draws deeper. The biographical research is there, but it needs more.
Enjoyable to watch. Just watch out for some punctuation mistakes and speaking out the dates. Also seeing more of her artworks would be amazing ❤
While I found the video informative as a biography, I feel like it lacked analysis of the artist and art itself. Like when Malfatti was critiqued as a “caricature artist” it would have been interesting to linger on the art itself, give some examples on why that critique was given, a survey of art at the time/place that contrasts with Malfatti, and maybe even some of your own analysis that draws deeper. The biographical research is there, but it needs more.
Keep up the good work!!! Greetings from Brazil
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