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The acting, dialogue, and editing all needed to be tightened up.

I enjoy his content and watched for quite a while before realising he was a writer. I listened to a couple of books on audible and they were unmemorable and kind of average. Obviously many people like them, but they were like airport novels, or late teen fiction, to me personally. This proof of concept was bad. The assault on the bad guy hut was pretty woeful. I pray for his sake it gets reworked.

Way to go 👍🙂

Great review, the two big issues with 'Rogue Elements' weren't budget-related. It's perfectly possible to ensure good dialogue and good acting talent on a minimal budget before principal photography even begins.

A very precise breakdown, but a good one. To me, the film mostly exuded a significant lack of creativity. I would never spend my money on crowdfunding someone else's toys, especially when they’re already successful enough in life. That’s not meant in a dismissive way to those who did choose to contribute.

I am also a fan of The Drinker. What I have seen on screen with this project was shocking. I was expecting so much more. The dialogue was pitiful, -Boring -Generic, -Heard a thousand times in other TV shows and movies. -Full of cliché and nonsense. It was embarrassing and cringe to listen too. This is labelled "A proof on concept",,, I don't get it. What we have seen on the screen is a revenge story set in the Special ops world. This concept has been done thousands of time before on TV or in movies by Tom Clancy, Robert Ludlum and Lee Child. What is there to prove here? Was it to prove that his books could be adapted for TV or movies? Perhaps they could, but what we learned while watching this short movie, is that Will Jordan AKA The critical drinker cannot write for TV or movies. There is a huge difference between a screen writer and an author as we can see after watching this project. Maybe it was to prove that the team hired to produce this movie was up to the task? We also got an answer after that. Of course not. Some will say that the budget of 300 thousand dollars was very small but, I beg to differ. Nothing was forcing them to make a 42 minutes long movie. In the original plan, the movie was set to be a 20 minutes long. but, plans changed after receiving triple what the funding campaigned was asking for and instead of putting the extra money on the quality of what was going to be put on screen, they decided to extend the run time. What was put on screen could have been shot with a few Go pros and some DJI cameras. At no point were RED cameras and their powerful lens felt used in an original manner. The only reason I know they used proper camera equipment was because of the interior filming in poor light conditions. A drone and a Jig would also have been useful. I really wanted this short movie to work out as I think it's time to see something new on TV, something original, but this is not it. Let's face it, The Drinker is probably going to have to sell the rights to his books getting a consultant credit for his troubles. Shocking. Now go watch the new show "The Agency" look at what they did with a minimum of words.

I salute you for backing the project, watching it, and then taking all this time to go over it. I didn't back it. I saw the trailer (Rogue Elements - Official Trailer) and was appalled. I tried to politely point out many issues you did that were obvious even in the trailer, including a complete lack of basic editing tricks like L and J cuts, and the dialogue delivery being bloated, hammy, and out of character. I don't think the director took me seriously, but in his defense, it's possible all of my suggestions came too late to be useful.

This was a solid breakdown. Overall, I'm a big fan of Critical Drinker. While I understand that this was only a concept, and the budget wasn't big, I was still expecting something much more competent than this perplexing dud. In too many ways it mimicked what Drinker has been criticizing in mainstream Hollywood productions. I haven't read his books, so I don't know if there was a disconnect between the source material and the script. As a writer myself, I hope this was a case of a poor adaptation. Maybe my expectations were too high? Sorry Drinker, if you're known for your insightful, critical reviews, then you'd better be prepared to bring an A-game to anything you write/produce. Live by the sword, die by the sword.

Drinker is obviously a grifter; he's just some guy who got popular with the Disney Star Wars movies reviews and banked on making that kind of slam dunk low effort videos; not even being willing to go balls deep with his dissections of the politics of movies (there's way better and more intelligent creators who dive into stuff like that). Dude has zero nuance, artistic comprehension or original creative voice. Critics (not that his criticism isn't surface level and basic, same as his writing apparently) that think their criticism will make them good creators have it backwards, if their drive to create was strong they would've done that first, not the other way around.

Is their a way to by this. My 3D printer is to small to print this

how to get it

Can you show a video on how to build the stock

play ‘thing called love’ by the darkness next pls

Great Idea...this could pair well with the "breachers" lean. You airsoft/paintball sir?

Where can I find your discord to purchase this???

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this is giving me red vs blue meets short bus vibes!

I love hearing "HIT HIS STUPID FRO!!!"

have you uploaded the files to any site??

Could you make the grip part without the grips so I could try to ad cups for my Samsung Odyssey Plus?

How do u get this

Can we get some shortbus commentary for this we need nick and Todd

nice

imagine shooting all the protestors encouraging trump to stay in office after hes not re-elected

“Years of practice” 😂

but how did you make it?

I'm loving the commentary! it is going to make me a better player. Watch out Shiva I'm coming for your leaderboard spot lol

I like the commentary

Is this the legit shiva ? Like the legend who is apparently incredible cus they play real paintball so much?

what a dork ❤

Do you have the STL posted anywhere? Would love to print these for my Quest

this is the best video ever

If i didn't paintball before, nows the time

an artistic masterpiece

The triple ding 👌👌👌

Whos here from that redit post

Where in pavlov is the kill house