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No worries. To quote the meme: Improvise. Adapt. Overcome 😅 It's up now and should be safe. Also starting with Season 2, I'll introduce an avatar. That should further confuse content ID in the future.

I need more info. Have you started to write the story? Because whatever it's missing, it usually comes out in the writing. The initial preparation is just to have a story map. So you can connect the dots and get to 'The End'. Also, when you say "something that can tie the whole thing together," that sounds like a missing designing principle. The designing principle is supposed to tie it all together. Are you writing a novel or screenplay? There is also the concept of 'unity' in screenwriting. Basically, once you've assembled all your pieces, you take a break from the script for a week or two and then come back and take a look if everything is adding to the 'unity'. As in, does all this stuff fit together, if not, you might need to make some changes. Swap character motivations or plotlines, whichever gives you a sense of "it's not adding to unity".

@@NarrativeArcade A novel PREMISE - A young optimistic man tries to better himself and the world around him, while providing for his family DESIGNING PRINCIPLE - A young man must use his experience and knowledge to better the world without succumbing to the harsh reality of the world and human nature THEME - Good and Evil are two sides of the same coin and should not be viewed separately The story starts The boys has always been bullied because of his weird way of doing things and as a result he gained a strong sense of justice distinguishing everything in either good or bad and then suddenly a small nuclear explosion happens in his hometown while he was away with his mom and friend as they went to a market in the next town. Upon hearing it and seeing the mushroom crowd he rushed home when he saw people running away he wanted to run in to check if his younger sister, twin brother and dad were caught in the explosion, but he was stopped by his mom as he would die if he entered the fire. The boy also seeing people's flesh burning and melting as they were trying to escape the explosion. After the fire was put out and radiation was checked it was confirmed to be safe and that's where the boy saw his father holding his twin and sister body while they were burnt alive . Fast forward years later. The boys is grown up with a family of his own and trying to make ends meet and and that his friends that went out with him and his mother to the market that day who also lost his parents and siblings tries to convince him to join an organization that wants to actually target the organization that caused the explosion years ago, but the protagonist isn't really interested and has left that life behind as he says, but his friend is persistent telling him don't you want to make that person that killed your twin brother and sister pay, but he still says am done with that life, the friend also tells him that they pay very well and that it can help solve his family problem, he still says no, and then his friends leaves and tells him to call him when he changes his mind, and then the landlord comes for the rent and he says fuck it Let me just do it. It's like killing two bird with one stone I get money and bring the people who destroyed many peoples life to justice And so he calls him, they go through training and he qualifies, one of the requirements is that outsiders that are not in from the army should have a family ( must have atleast a child ). And then given a handbook of the abilities they know and what are they weaknesses and abilities they have a disadvantage or advantage over ( the name of their magic system is atom manipulation ) by manipulating their atoms they can do certain things like by rearranging their molecules they can reinforce their atomic bonds giving their increased durability, strength or increased density and as they they can only control the atoms in their body they can only cover a small portion of their body but can shift it to any direction. Also note that by reinforcing a particular side you take the atoms of a particular regions to reinforce another leaving that side very fragile that touching it might even cause bodily harm thereby leaving the organs unprotected to any fragile attack. Other abilities from the atomic manipulation is generating fire which you can shoot out of your body by vibrating your molecules or atoms fastabd then using the heat as fire, but it does have a downside you see if you vibrating your molecules to generate fire you end up becoming thin as you chip away at the atoms or you can freeze to death as you need some hear in your body to function, as well as the other abilities like gravity control, forcefield generation, phasing, nuclear and so on. And they are given a drug to allow them to use their powers fully as citizens abilities are suppressed because of what happened when people first gained their abilities So during their first mission which was to destroy a factory which was being used by the terrorist everything was going well, until a group of people came and attacked killing the protagonist and when the friend tried to fight back he died too, the mission was interrupted by another group after hearing that the organization senrbtheor more capable force to help get them out of their, but then they saw a large monsters body which appeared like out of thin air , and the leader heard about it he decided to handle the monster by destroying three of it's four heart and reverted back to the protagonist and so he was taken back to the headquarters and so the government started doing research on his family Afterwards the head of the five nations had a meeting that they sighted a monster and it disappeared without them seeing the corpse or smoke of the dead monsters body like 11 years, the head of the nation that took the boy said they don't know of any monster, but the other monster didn't believe at all and decided to let the matter go for now So afterwards the protagonist when the protagonist woke up from his concussion he was was surprised that he was awake and so he asked whether the mission was a success and they said yes, also what about his friend, they said he died, my guy was shocked and was like If I can remember I got cut in half and decided to check his body and saw a line on it that had been healed and was like how and afterwards immediately asked can he go now and can they send him his money now . They sent him his money and said he couldn't go as the government has an interest in him while giving an injection. They said he could live his normal life, hut he would now work for the government and will be getting paid. After which he was assigned to another squad as most of the his team mates had died and was warned by some of the members of the group to keep his idealogy to yourself as they believe he was the cause of his groups death ( he was preaching to them that they should capture the enemy alive and not kill any of them ) One of the teammates approached him and befriends him causing him a small him a small injury The protagonist heads home for the day and pays the house rent, when he reaches he asks his wife where his daughter is and she says they are playing and hide and seeks and he says can't you find her, she says I know where you she is I just want her to think she can hide and he asks where is she she tells him and he goes and find her saying I found you, the daughter says mom you see, you couldn't find me but dad did, the mon says in her mind that it's because I told him and he tells his wife that his found a new job working for the government and his paid the house rent and she was like in a single day, hmmm 🤔 it's like we might move to a better place these one a single pay can cover our house rent Fast-forwad at night he has a nightmare of his friend dying crying for help, why didn't you save me, you left there to die. Also his twin brother and sister crying as they were getting burnt alive, also a man crying what did I do to you to deserve these. Have I done you any wrong and anyone wrong, so why punish me. He wakes up and washes his face and goes back to sleep. The next mission to stop destroy a warehouse where terrorist use as their hideout, the mission is a success they go and their they find out that the warehouse was used to manufacture robots, upon destroying the robot the man they find their says that they are coming and they will over us soon and before he can utter any other word he is killed, the next day, there's an attack on their country it's the robot, the team fight and while also loosing some team mates

@@NarrativeArcade PREMISE - A young optimistic man tries to better himself and the people around him, while providing for his family. DESIGNING PRINCIPLE - A young man must use his experience and knowledge to better the world without succumbing to the harsh reality of the world. THEME - Evil and Good are two sides of the same coin and should not be viewed separately. Even summarizing the story and still leaving important things that would give you full a picture would be very long, but if you will still help me I can post it. And it's a novel Yes. After thinking and rethinking about it over and over again. I believe it's the designing principle, so can I send a summary of the story ( although long ) to see if you can help me find a better designing principle cause my own feels stale and somewhat boring

"in a medium where many will keep playing so long as the game is fun." I think that's true for movies too though. Most people don't understand the visual language on screen. Just watch any cinematography breakdown, most people don't understand why the director chose to jump the 180 line at this moment in the scene but they will feel it. They enjoy it on an unconscious level because it's visual storytelling. Same will happen with gameplay for most people. Think that's fine, technically when you do your job right as a storyteller, it shouldn't be obvious you're experiencing a story. You're experiencing the story vicariously through the characters. Regarding, TLOU 2, unfortunately we'll never know because I wouldn't even play it if I was paid to do so. I hate what Druckmann did, he's the Rian Johnson of gaming lol

Absolute geniuses at work

We can change "the first draft of everything is shit" to "the first draft of everything is Disney Star Wars."

On its surface, not much. There are ways to make the line work. This wasn't it.

I didn't see anything in the series to make the chant make sense. It was like visiting your Catholic friend's mass and you just feel like your standing up and sitting down a lot. It's so awkward without context.

​@@jobiy1999 There is context. The evil cult leader who pushes everyone around (literally and figuratively) is beginning a ceremony to induct her children into the cult.

I can't fix this crap either but we can all laugh at it hahaha

Thank you! The Naruto breakdown dropped too, it's pretty much the same style. Just more of everything. So feel free to check that one out :)