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Meri Gazal by ‘Bhala’ - Yogendra Jawadekar
Приєднався 20 чер 2020
I am a pediatrician by profession. I have tried writing a few gazals in Urdu/ Hindi . I wish to narrate these gazals on this channel. I plan to share a new gazal every week.
I am an amateur writer. But I have tried to learn the intricacies of gazal writing and made an attempt to follow the rules. I don’t know how to read and write in Urdu/Arabic script properly. So it is quite likely that I have made mistakes. I have tried avoiding and rectifying these mistakes as far as possible.
Sangeeta Joshi ( the first lady gazal poet in Marathi) , Sandeep Gupte ( Sandeep) whose ‘Deewan’ acquired critical acclaim as well as popularity and Dr. Raveendra Shivde, a senior practising gynaecologist who also is a scholar of Urdu, Persian and Sanskrit have been my inspiration. I have tried learning the craft of gazal writing from these stalwarts .
I would like you all to critically appreciate my gazals and give me a feedback, which will encourage me to write in a better way.
So , let me begin --
I am an amateur writer. But I have tried to learn the intricacies of gazal writing and made an attempt to follow the rules. I don’t know how to read and write in Urdu/Arabic script properly. So it is quite likely that I have made mistakes. I have tried avoiding and rectifying these mistakes as far as possible.
Sangeeta Joshi ( the first lady gazal poet in Marathi) , Sandeep Gupte ( Sandeep) whose ‘Deewan’ acquired critical acclaim as well as popularity and Dr. Raveendra Shivde, a senior practising gynaecologist who also is a scholar of Urdu, Persian and Sanskrit have been my inspiration. I have tried learning the craft of gazal writing from these stalwarts .
I would like you all to critically appreciate my gazals and give me a feedback, which will encourage me to write in a better way.
So , let me begin --
Відео
‘Vatan’
Переглядів 4721 день тому
India is my abode and I love it because it is a multicultural, multilingual conglomeration of people. India respects freedom , equality and brotherhood. Let’s strengthen the ‘unity in diversity’ of Bharat with the tricolour in our hands ! Meanings of some Urdu words- आशियाना- घर मुल्क़ - देश ज़बॅां- भाषा तहज़ीब- सभ्यता/ संस्कृति मज़हब - धर्म पनाह- आसरा सुभा - प्रांत/ राज्य बोली - भाषा मूसिक़ी- ...
‘Chirag’
Переглядів 52Місяць тому
A lamp with a slowly burning flame of love should be kindled in everyone’s heart !
‘Besabab’
Переглядів 692 місяці тому
Some people people respect and protect their conscience at any cost, the others - sell the conscience ! - This gazal is about them !
‘Bebas’
Переглядів 622 місяці тому
मैंने इस ग़ज़ल में कुछ नये तजरिबे अपनाए हैं। इस ग़ज़ल में मतले से लेकर मक़्ते तक के हर शेर में मेरा तख़ल्लुस शामिल है । इस ग़ज़ल में चौदह मिस्रे हैं और आख़री दो मिस्रों में एक मोड़ भी है । तो ये ग़ज़ल एक सॅानेट भी कहला सकती है ।
‘Aaj’
Переглядів 813 місяці тому
The atmosphere in a medical college is that of a high voltage competition. In the topmost institutes , all students are great academic achievers. I was one of such people who are not taught to handle failure. Jealousy about competitors and harsh criticism of oneself amounting to self doubt was a norm in our college days. Learning to be a compassionate person takes a lot of learning.
‘Door Tak ‘ -‘दूर तक’
Переглядів 783 місяці тому
While everyone walks alone on the path of life, there is someone like a shadow who always walks by one’s side .
खूप छान गझल. आवडली.
वाह ! सगळया अक्षरांच्या गजला झाल्या? दीवान काढू शकतोस ....
Bhot khob sir,
वाह! 👏👏
क्या बात है! किती छान उच्चार.... उत्तम रित्या पोहोचवता तुम्ही गझल... छान वाटलं बऱ्याच वर्षांनी तुमचं सादरीकरण ऐकून...
نشا یاروں کا ! محفل خدھی زندہ ہو گئی!
क्या बात है... व्हेरी नोस्टालजिक❤
❤शुक्रिया ❤
आपकी ग़ज़ल बहुत खूब होती है।
आपकी वजहसे उर्दू सुनने मिलती है इसलिये हम भी आपके शुक्रगुजार हैं। 🙏🙏
सारे जहाँ से अच्छा हिंदुस्थान हमारा। 🇮🇳 🇮🇳
Nice one 👌👌
जावडेकर जी, ❤very beautiful.
जावडेकर सर آپکی خواہش بڑی عمدا ہیں 🎉
छान ❤🎉
मस्त 👌👌
Nice👌
Superb 👍
'रुह अेाेर जान' एकाच नाण्याच्या दोन बाजू. 👍🙏
Very beautiful ❤
अंधेरे के पीछे उजाला छुपा है ...👍
Kya baat dr sahab...osom keep it up
❤मस्त
بیحد خوبصورت جاؤڈیکر صاحب۔
Wah bhai… proud of being a GSite
👌👌🙏🙏
मस्त चैन ❤
वाह! 👌🙏
You are always new sir.
Well said …
क्या बात है डॉक्टर साहब!!!!
वाह वाह जनाब ! 👏
Mashallah
Shukriya Ustad....
मस्त ❤
बढिया
Very nice 👌 सर.
👌👌👍👍
Bhot khub sir آخری سیر لاجواب❤
बहोत खूब
Geet sunne wali sath hi to hai❤❤
Good morning sir
❤❤
मस्त! मजा आया. 😄😄
Very nice! Golden moments! Highly nostalgic!
Mastttt
Kya baat hai ❤
सुंदर 👌
Very nice.
Bahot Badhiya