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You need to work on your english because there are a lot's of grammatical mistakes and errors and even if english is not your first language or you're not good at it you can take the help of ai or whatsoever... It will only help you because when I'm reading ur story i can't even go halfway through it because it's hard to read.. Take it as a constructive criticism

What does Shekhawat mean ...??

Ig you wanna say she covered instead of shekhawat

bro second part

Why jenny did that ?

Author please tell me one thing didn't he kiss the girl for real?

But didn't he cheat on her for real he was kissing the girl for real i asked u to complete the ff so that we can see his miserable life after cheating on her and u are showing us that like she doesn't have any self respect

Guys this is a recap of part 3 and part 4 will be out tomorrow okay guys

Part 2 ua-cam.com/video/PEYOhRHuUC8/v-deo.htmlsi=lvTJH7vr3lSUeb6-

Part 1 ua-cam.com/video/m-m91cHgUrU/v-deo.htmlsi=XyersleSjvBx7jHT

Nice

Please upload next part of this ff

Why are you posting same ff again and again

Nice

Y again u uploaded it...

First

fix your grammar I can't withstand reading it while second guessing adjectives!

This wasn't good at all . If yn hadn't woken up he was surely going to marry nancy .

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First

First

Um you can keep the fan off when you do voiceover it will make the voice clearer. It's just a advice author. I didn't mean to be rude. 😊

and pleass reply me ff writer but you are the best writer in english

hi are you hindu you are the best english ff for jungkook 😇😇😇😇

Your not uploading previous series EP so it's useless to read this becz after this you will also not upload the next EP sooo❤

It's such a disgusting ff 🤢🤮

It's a disgusting ff 🤢🤮

Didi I love your videos 🤌🤌

What is this ...u write different thumbnail and write different story... it's not good to do this...

Please make bonus part

Make a bonus part please 😊😊😊

How easily you ended the story,what's the rush ,I didn't understand even little bite like what happened,in a minute you had ended whole story , sorry to say but that is such a disappointment ❤

Why are you in a hurry?

Plz author make bonus part where make tae entry who marry y/n and love her and they have kids.. Make JK and her cheater sister jelouse when they see y/n is happy with tae.. Plz author

You are right author.. A cheater is always a cheater...

Really wanna know about the witch sister ...

Go yn!

What happened to that bitch who destroyed her own sister's house. Why he wants her back now didn't he told his mistress that he'll divorce yn nd marry her shameless jerk he needs to regret his whole life nd his mistress too

So good

Cant wait for this series

Hey what about the previous one ?.. won't you upload a part 2 or bonus 😢plz unni give a bonus plz❤❤❤

What about cheating ff please complete it i am requesting you

Not gonna lie the THUMBNAIL WAS FUCKING. AWESOME 😫⚡

Next part soon pls