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You not telling enough story you do a lot of discribing emotions how do you know her heart is beating and what zena is thinking

What the heck kind of story is this who was the woman he betrayed her with what was all the stories on the phone, was Zena the person that he betrayed her friend WHAT THE HECK WASTED MY FREEKING TIME LISTENING TO THIS CRAP, YOU TALKED A WHOLE LOT AND SAID NOT A DAMN THING, SOO FREEKING ANNOYING 😔 🇵🇦

The voice of reading does not follow the writing

You are a great narrator, I love listening to your stories; as well as learning a lot from it. I am a granny I find your stories very captivating. Listening to you, is also improving my writing skills 😂

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I enjoyed the story. Many people are not what they seem to be

How did she escaped the Dungeon ?

Great story, but quite confusing.

Bull shit story with out picture action that is what makes these story interesting if it was for the audio only no one would listen to these story

"This video is truly amazing! The way you build the plot is so creative. 7:50 was incredibly tense! 🔪

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Why do you have the image rocking back and forth? The eyes need stability 😊

Who was Lila mother?? And talking about leaving it in the past, I think that one should been left in the past especially when Margaret had changed.🤔

This is extremely confusing. Why is her father upset because she married a beggar, didn't he married her off to said beggar??

Great story

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Where is the transcript? It is a good read, but without the transcript to clarify some spots that don't add up, I can't say much. Thank you all the same.

i really hate the way the screen moves like that

Wow nice story pls for part two

Nothing you do in the dark that will never reveled one day it wasike that in Khwames life.

People should make up their own minds about the heart of a person on their own instead of listening to someone with a envious and wicked agenda. When someone demands that I DO NOT LIKE SOMEONE for no reason or because they DO NOT LIKE THE PERSON, i just say I do not play those type of games my decisions about matters of the heart come from me only. NO ONE DESERVES CRUELTY, HATE, AND ABUSE. We are all made in the image of Yah thy Elohim therefore we should walk in light instead of darkness! 1 Peter 2:9 “But ye are a chosen generation, a royal priesthood, an holy nation, a peculiar people; that ye should shew forth the praises of him who hath called you out of darkness into his marvellous light:”

Drawn out repeated story.

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BS redemption my foot she helped kill her mother but she want the woman to like her pure BS 🇵🇦

Where is her father???

Nice one

You people don't marry for love anyway you marry for what you can get out of it

Making a mountain out of a molehill

What he has is non of your business he doesn't owe any of you anything, but his wife

Why do you keep repeating lines

Part 2 Please

This story is pure nonsense! What is she upset about I taught it was the stepmother who had made marry . This is all over the place and makes no sense!

WONDERFUL STORY!!! & GREAT NARRATOR!!! THIS STORY HAS AN AWESOME MEANING🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾

What a pity. I don't understand why some women deal wickedly by hurting step children just to manipulate men to gain control over spouses. 😂❤❤

All these storylines are ghe same. Are Africans so wicked to each other? I'm tempted to think "no smoke no fire"

It's a great lesson to be learnt but no photos to compliment

My God! Vivian is a really sick person! People that are cruel to children are the WORST to me! I mean How do you carry that kind of guilt, hate, & jealousy for years & years ?! Damn! 😮😮

A beautiful story.... Thanks for sharing

It’s ironic how the stepmother not only saw her a burden but hates her to the point where wherever she goes she must suffer 😢. Hatred is a deadly disease.

Wonderful creation of a storyline. From the USA.

I see myself in this family story. I was the strong one, but the quiet one, who was very observant of what was going on around me.

Great story the cruelty of a stepmother for rejecting Aisha set her free and acquire strength she didn't know she has and Ali encourage her to her dreams of being independence that frustrate her wicked stepmother and it was too late for her to get her back.

Beautiful story thanks for sharing

Interesting indeed love it quite a high level of maturity ❤😢

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Evil Agnes 😅😅😅😅

Agnes was a greedy woman married for wealth not for love and thought she had all the power to manipulate and control her stepdaughter but all invain, never underestimate a person ❤❤