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THE FLAW
Desmond Hall introduces "the charcter flaw" and its various forms.
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Відео

The Wound and the Flaw
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The Wound and the Flaw
Seeding the Wound
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Seeding the Wound
Philosophical stakes: Emotional Suffering
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Philosophical stakes: Emotional Suffering
Philosophical stakes intro
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Philosophical stakes intro
Philosophical Stakes: Opposition to Emotional Goal
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Philosophical Stakes: Opposition to Emotional Goal
Dramatic Irony : TENSION
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Dramatic Irony : TENSION
Dramatic Irony: TECHNIQUE
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Dramatic Irony: TECHNIQUE
Dramatic Irony: HUMOR
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Dramatic Irony: HUMOR
Blake Snyder's Story Genres: Why Dun It
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Blake Snyder's Story Genres: Why Dun It
Blake Snyder's Story Genres: Superhero
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Blake Snyder's Story Genres: Superhero
Blake Snyder's Story Genres: Institutionalized
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Blake Snyder's Story Genres: Institutionalized
Dude with a Problem
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Dude with a Problem
Rights of Passage
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Rights of Passage
Buddy Love
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Buddy Love
Monster in the House
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Monster in the House
Golden Fleece
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Golden Fleece
Out of the Bottle
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Out of the Bottle
Suspense at the Middle
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Suspense at the Middle
Suspense from the Start
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Suspense from the Start
Suspense on the Sentence Level
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Suspense on the Sentence Level
"The Limits of Human Experience, Part 1"
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"The Limits of Human Experience, Part 1"
"Human limits P. 3"
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"Human limits P. 3"
""Human limits P 2"
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""Human limits P 2"
Events
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Events
Counting beats
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Counting beats
Concrete actions
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Concrete actions
UnConference 2023
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UnConference 2023
Novel Incubator
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Novel Incubator
McKee Story
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McKee Story

КОМЕНТАРІ

  • @lmarie931
    @lmarie931 26 днів тому

    I love the idea of a wounding event as the unstable ground a character stands on. I wonder if in an attempt to make a character seem strong at the start (and hurry things along), some authors forget to take the time to set this up in the back story. When a character is strong out of the gate, the story doesn't seem as satisfying, at least to me.

  • @lmarie931
    @lmarie931 Місяць тому

    Great insight. Lately, I've seen books where the main character doesn't seem to have a flaw at all. In those stories, most of which I don't wind up finishing, I'm never worried about whether the character will achieve his or her goal, because the character seems all powerful.

    • @Writerunboxed
      @Writerunboxed 28 днів тому

      That's an interesting --and perplexing-- trend!

  • @PaulRWorthington
    @PaulRWorthington Рік тому

    This was great - simple and eye-opening. Thanks!

  • @beverlypatt7679
    @beverlypatt7679 Рік тому

    This second example, Jason Reynold's, is so interesting! I always think of the pressure/conflict mounting but this shows it doesn't have to be that way. Thank you!

  • @beverlypatt7679
    @beverlypatt7679 Рік тому

    Deception is misspelled:) But this is very helpful! Thank you!

  • @daver1787
    @daver1787 Рік тому

    Excellent commentary

  • @jaliyahbrock2195
    @jaliyahbrock2195 Рік тому

    🎶 'Promo sm'

  • @firefly4704
    @firefly4704 Рік тому

    I found them music to be quite distracting, especially in conjunction with the reverb (?) or whatever effectd was used on the narrator's voice.

  • @ouibefree
    @ouibefree 2 роки тому

    Thanks for pointing out that thinking about one's writing is the same as writing. I have to spend a lot of time thinking and yet it feels like I'm not getting anything done.

  • @tedmalissia8433
    @tedmalissia8433 3 роки тому

    ue4 vun.fyi

  • @Ca11mewhatever
    @Ca11mewhatever 4 роки тому

    the book is beautiful, really enjoyed reading it!

    • @FirstLast-tj4eh
      @FirstLast-tj4eh 3 роки тому

      i just finished it today! so beautifully written. 🤍

  • @stronglady665
    @stronglady665 4 роки тому

    I am currently 64% into THE GERMAN HEIRESS and absolutely loving it! If this is any indication, you have a great career ahead of you.

  • @sumedha10
    @sumedha10 4 роки тому

    Is she the one beekeeper in Bihar? Your voice is very low in the video

  • @cathymccraw1936
    @cathymccraw1936 4 роки тому

    Interesting to hear how much work went into writing this book. It was very well written

  • @ChippyPinkChannel
    @ChippyPinkChannel 4 роки тому

    Can’t wait to get the book. Thanks for sharing. The audio on this video is very poor. Something to look at going forward. 😁

  • @theguywiththebook363
    @theguywiththebook363 4 роки тому

    Absolutely loved your book! Best wishes to you :)

  • @lavdoshgjuzaj6268
    @lavdoshgjuzaj6268 4 роки тому

    Trying to find some masks on Amazon to protect from Corona, "The Last Bathing Beauty" was suggested on the bottom, with some other tittles. I assumed it was a movie and I continued looking for masks, after ordering the masks I was wondering where did that 60"s beauty go? and went back to look for that title. After reading there the little description of the book somehow it resonated with my life. Me growing up in Albania, A third world Communist country. Always dreaming of America and becoming a singer, and than coming to NY, where things were not as I dreamt, and after years and years of struggles, I found myself with 2 babies but always young and full of hope and dreams. Reading the description of the book made me write some verses dedicated to my Mom, that is my inspiration. I Can't wait to read the book to find out if Boop makes it....I believe the book should be made movie. Thnx Amy.

    • @Writerunboxed
      @Writerunboxed 4 роки тому

      What a great comment. We'll be sure the author sees it. Thanks!