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Part 2

Ok really really need a part 2 please

Part 2

More part please 🙏🙏🙏

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I need more of this story

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Please make part 2 please ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

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Why do authors feel if they're not going to hook up Hinata with Naruto do they gotta tear her down and make her into a total b**** again. If it doesn't enhance the story, don't change it if you're not going to hook him up. Just have to be too shy to say anything and ignore her.

I wish these authors were quick calling Naruto The jailer he is not the jailer. He's the jail, he has no choice. A jailer has a choice for f***'s sake. When you call him the jailer, it's like he has some of the responsibility, which he does not. The author missed the entire point of the original Naruto. It is a world at war. Even if it's there in peacetime, they're still fighting battles and they use child soldiers. He wanted to draw attention to child soldiers. That's why the author wrote the story the way he and by having them aged up it serves no f****** purpose. It does not enhance the story. It is pandering to people who won't even listen to his story. And truthfully, I am sick of authors doing this. They're censoring themselves to make everybody happy. And end up not making anybody happy and again. It doesn't enhance the story. It detracts from the original purpose of the story. I feel at this point these fan pitching authors are purposely spitting on the original story just because they can. I don't want anybody to get me wrong though. This story is interesting parts of it. I absolutely love parts of it. I hate I'm making this comment because yes, it feels like these fan fiction authors do not even appreciate the original author's works. They rip out certain pillars of the story. Just because they feel like it makes people feel bad. I'm sorry. Why would you age them up? When you're letting them be beat after death as children. I know there is not a single village. In the elemental nations is going to wait till they're 18. That's b******* That's pandering, and before you guys all think well. It's just fan fiction this fan fiction. Or the original story had a lot of societal commentary in it. It's like Jean Roddenberry and Star Trek. There's a lot of stuff in it. That could be applied to modern day. And yes, guess what in modern day there are child soldiers which is what kiss you. Motivated to draw attention to. He even did a d*** interview where he told people that and yet people keep on messing with his story and don't get me wrong. I don't want mind Chang in Canon. I do mind when you p*** on it. You rip out parts of it that don't need to be ripped out and it doesn't do anything for your own story for f**** say don't change it if you're not going to have it, affect your story. You're only doing it cause you want to include a dull element Slater on and don't want to hear a bunch of f****** complaints and if you feel that bad about it, don't even post this story is reposted. Congrat thumbs up to the one who did it cause. It's actually a good listening but I'm going to pick it apart because I do that to every story I listen to even ones I absolutely love. And before anybody says if you don't like it don't listen to It. I can't tell if I like it or not unless I listen to It. That is one of the most asinine comments that people make on UA-cam and it's an open forum. So I'm going to comment that's what people forget. UA-cam is not just where you post your stuff to be listened to. It's posted to be listening to. It's posted to be listened to and commented on. Yeah, I can tell this story's just pandering to people who don't like the idea of kids killing, because they will not even say the word killing they're saying marking. What the f*** does that mean? Other than you get paid to kill someone. How is it better using that term? It isn't.

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I need more of this story

Part 2 let's go please 😮

Story name; “In a new world as a shinobi god” by Escarabjal

please make part 2 and more

Could u give credit to the author by putting the link of the fanfic on the description

Please make part 2 and more of this fanfic

Calling it quits @ 3:13:58. Got too boring for me.

Of course in every Naruto/DxD crossover Naruto has to be an a-hole towards Issei.

Bro you must upload it

Next part must❤❤❤

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Please could you send the link or name for this fan fiction 🙏🏻🙏🏻☺️

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Part 2 plz

Part 2 plz

Please part 2 and 3

Please part 2 and 3

Part 2 to part 3 plz sir 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

Ok

Story is called the shardbinder by Hell is fun21

please part 2 bro this is so fucking good

Blud should not lose a single fight

Mmm already seen it

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