I don't know this song, I also can't read the title :) but your playing sounds nice, so keep practicing! Maybe I would try to put a little bit more dynamics in the playing, like short crescendos (playing things start from quiet and the gets louder bit by bit), or diminuendos (opposite of crescendo). Maybe adding a slight rubato can help too. Anyways, I hope you have a great day! :)
I don't know this song, I also can't read the title :) but your playing sounds nice, so keep practicing! Maybe I would try to put a little bit more dynamics in the playing, like short crescendos (playing things start from quiet and the gets louder bit by bit), or diminuendos (opposite of crescendo). Maybe adding a slight rubato can help too. Anyways, I hope you have a great day! :)